IDEAS: The heart of the message, the content of the piece, the main theme, with details that enrich and develop the theme | ORGANIZATION: The internal structure; the thread of the central meaning; the logical and sometimes intriguing pattern of the ideas | VOICE: The heart and soul; magic wit, feeling, and conviction of the writer coming out |
DQ: Did the writer stay focused and share original and fresh information or perspective about the topic? | DQ: Does the organizational structure enhance the ideas and make it easier to understand? | DQ: Would you keep reading this piece if it were longer? |
5. This paper is clear and focused. It holds the reader’s attention. Relevant anecdotes and details enrich the central theme. | 5. The organization enhances and showcases the central idea or theme. Includes a satisfying introduction and conclusion. | 5. The writer speaks directly to the reader in a way that is individual, compelling, engaging, and has personality. |
4. This paper is clear. It holds the reader’s attention. Relevant anecdotes and details support the central theme. | 4. Organization is clear and coherent. Order and structure are present, but may seem formulaic.
| 4. The writer speaks to the reader in a way that is personal and engaging. |
3. The writer is beginning to define the topic, even though development is still basic or general. | 3. The organizational structure is strong enough to move the reader through the text without too much confusion. | 3. The writer seems sincere but not fully engaged or involved. The result is pleasant or even personable, but not compelling. |
2. The writer is beginning to define the topic; development is basic and may be vague. | 2. The writing lacks a clear organizational structure. An occasional organizational device is discernible; however, the writing is either difficult to follow and the reader has to reread substantial portions or the piece is simply too short to demonstrate organizational skills. | 2. The writer seems disengaged and distracted from both the topic and the audience |
1. The paper has no clear sense of purpose or central theme. The reader must make inferences based on sketchy or missing details. | 1. The writing lacks a clear sense of direction. | 1. The writer seems indifferent, uninvolved, or distanced from the topic and/or the audience. |
WORD CHOICE: The use of colorful, precise language that moves and enlightens the reader | SENTENCE FLUENCY: The rhythm and flow of the language; the sound of the word patterns and the way in which the writing plays to the ear, not just the eye | CONVENTIONS: The mechanical correctness of the piece; spelling, grammar and usage, paragraphing, use of capitalization and punctuation |
DQ: Do the words and phrases create vivid pictures and linger in your mind? | DQ: Do the words and phrases flow together as you read the piece aloud? | How much editing will this piece take to make it publishable? |
5. Words convey the intended message in a precise, interesting, and natural way. | 5. The writing has an easy flow, rhythm, and cadence. | 5. The writer demonstrates a good grasp of standard writing conventions (e.g. spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, usage, paragraphing) |
4. Words effectively convey the intended message. The writer employs a variety of words that are functional and appropriate to audience and purpose. | 4. The writing has an easy flow in places, yet in others it is more businesslike.
| 4. The writer shows a sound grasp of standard writing conventions for the most part in the writing. |
3. The language is functional, even if it lacks much energy. It is easy to figure out the writer’s meaning on a general level. | 3. The text hums along with a steady beat but tends to be more pleasant or businesslike than musical. | 3. The writer shows reasonable control over a limited range of standard writing conventions. |
2. Language is monotonous and/or misused, detracting from the meaning and impact. | 2. The writing is a bit difficult to read aloud smoothly. | 2. Errors in spelling, punctuation, capitalization, usage, and grammar and/or paragraphing interfere with the reader’s ability to follow the text and understand it. |
1. The writer demonstrates limited vocabulary. | 1.The reader has to practice quite a bit in order to give the paper a fair interpretive reading. | 1. Errors in spelling, punctuation, capitalization, usage, and grammar and/or paragraphing repeatedly distract the reader and make the text difficult to read. |