IALT add detail to my story.


I know I can do this when:

·      I can write about when, who and where the story happened.

·           I can write 3 or more things to describe what happened.

On Saturday mum bought me a lego star wars set from K Mart. I went with my family. I watched Star wars episode thirteen. My lego set has a gun. I liked it because I had a place to put it.

I am learning to add detail to my story. Adding detail means talking about who, when, where and what happened in the story. It is easy to add detail.