Writing: Term 1, Week 10

WALHT:

Plan a story using a graphic organiser.

Success Criteria:

I can use a graphic organiser to plan my ideas.

I can use simple, compound, and complex sentences.

I can extend my ideas by using descriptive language.

Our Answer Garden of Fairy Tales

Original Fairy Tale

My Wield Fairy Tale

Once upon a time there was a little girl named Little Red Riding Hood, Who went to her Grandma’s house because she was sick.  

Once upon a time there was a cheeky little boy named Little Ninja Oscar Hood, who went to his Grandpa’s house because he was Grandpa wanted to see him because there wasn’t any skype!

Grandma’s house was in the forest, But what Little Red Riding Hood didn’t Know was that there was a Big Bad Wolf ! So she  skipped down the path to her grandma’s house.

Grandpa’s house was in the forest but Little Black Oscar Hood needed to go by himself! But what he didn’t know was that there was a Big Bad Scary Wolf! So Little Oscar walked down the path to his grandpa’s house.

The Wolf heard the song of her going to grandma’s house. Now the Wolf had a plan to eat her up!

The Wolf heard the his footsteps of him going to grandpa’s house. Now the Wolf had a plan to gobble him up!

Little Red Riding Hood made it to her grandma’s house. Inside the house the Wolf ate grandma up!

Little Ninja Oscar Hood made it to his grandpa’s house after the Wolf ate grandpa up!

When Little Red Riding Hood was inside she said… “What big eyes you have”

“ They are for to see you better with.” replied the Wolf.

“What a big nose you have.”

“better to smell you with.”

“What big teeth you have.”

“BETTER TO EAT YOU WITH!!!”

When Little Ninja Oscar Hood was inside he said… “What big ears you have.”

“better to hear you with.”

“What big eyes you have”

“They are for to see you better with.” replied the Wolf sneekly.

“What big teeth you have.”

“BETTER TO EAT YOU WITH!!!”

Shouted the Wolf

“AHH!” screamed Red Riding Hood, The scream was so loud that a woodcutter heard it and KILLED the Wolf. Grandma was alive and all SOGGY! and they lived happily ever after.

Little Ninja Hood Oscar just smiled. He was smart, he was brave, and he had a cunning idea ... Oscar pulled a pistol out of his pocket and... BAMM!! The Wolf exploded and out came Grandpa. Grandpa was alive but all SOGGY AND GROSS! Grandpa took a shower and they lived happily ever after.

The End