Miss ashley came with food and the box. Then she put the food in the magic box. When Miss Ashley put the blindfold on, it felt like
As I stood waiting, my heart was going “fast”. I put my hand nervously into the box, and I felt
My Finger was touching a teabag.
I squeezed it and water came out and The class giggled as
It smelt disgusting.
It felt water and i
I had fun. And it was another person’s turn. And there one was murdered and syariah lee and she didn't want to eat it and miss
Fores her to eat it and miss toke the bland fode and she looked and when she looked at it and miss said look it was just murdered
And syariah lee oh and then the hole the class had a turn
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