I am learning about adding detail to my writing.
I know I can do this when:
When - blue
Why - purple
What - yellow
It was such a beautiful, sunny day. In the morning I met up with my friends and cousins. We all walked down to the beach with my mum and dad. We got to play in the sand and make sandcastles. We made a huge sandcastle with a moat around it. Then we took the paddle boards into the water and had fun in the waves. We had to be careful to stay in between the flags. My mum took out the yummy food from the basket. We had sandwiches, fruit and chips. We even got to eat ice-cream! It is fun to visit the beach.