Castle

                           Success criteria

• 1 paragraph at least - 2 is you are a star.
• You must have at least 15 lines.
• 8-9 sentences. Some long, some short.
• 2 Similes

          Once upon a time there was a castle on a cliff as tall the eiffel tower

It was surrounded by a lake with great big Alligators stalking from way beneath.

The wind passed through into my ear whispering something that could not be understood.

There in the castle lived a selfish mean fat witch therefore she had no friends because she was cruel and horrifyingly scary. She sounded as if a screeching eagle would never stop. She had jagged broken buck tooth teeth. Her nose had fat ugly wart.Her chin was as bum shaped.  Her hat was hanging off the side of her bolbis overgrown head. Her clothes

were as shredded and smelly , as her mean mouth.

No one dared to be friends with that piece of garbage.