Crafting a “Working” Thesis Statement
Writer Tip: Giving it a Try
What is your broad idea?
What are some possible topics that you care about or have experience with or want to learn more about?
Write/Remember the prompt and course/assignment learning goals:
Start Small, Listen to the Conversation: Find Key Terms, Seek Out Issues/Controversies (write them down, have fun exploring!)
Go Inward, What Might You Try to Say/Add to the Conversation? Be You!
What topic are you going to write about?
What position might you take on this topic? What might you advocate for, or seek to defend about the topic? (Remember the prompt and learning goals!)
How will you defend this position? What support will you offer?
Why should your audience care about your position and this topic?
Now put all that into 1-2 sentences and you've got a draft, or “Working Thesis”! Remember it’s temporary and be open to changing it as you go through the writing process! An effective thesis will (adapted from Steven D. Krause):
First Try: Just the topic and a broad (bad, lame) claim!
Second Try: Extend the claim a bit, write what “this essay” will do/say.
Third Try: Make an arguable, specific claim. Be sure to nod to the goals of the writing assignment and/or class. Give the reader a sense of what you’ll argue and make them care.
How Do I Know if My Thesis is Strong? (from UNC Chapel Hill’s Writing Center)