1. Narrative Planning Sheet

Characters (Major and minor characters - give names, descriptions, traits, feelings … etc)

Ben(Minor)                     Jonathan(Minor)                 Carl(Major)                       The gang(Minor)

Strong                            Scientific                            Brave                                Angry

Bulky                              Genius                               Courageous                      space takers

Muscular                        Smart                                 Risk taker                         taunting

Weight lifter                    Intelligent                            Leader                              annoying

Usually wears                Usually wears                    Always wearing                Always wearing

working out clothes       scientific clothes                clothes that stand out       sad looking clothes

Setting (When, where, … be descriptive)

Saturday morning at 6:00 Am, town (Avondale), A quiet street right next to a park, On a dark cloudy day, 2016.

Problem/Conflict (The main dilemma that leads the characters to act in the way they did)

There were a gang of 5 bullies at the park and they put their thing all around the playground so Ben, Carl and Jonathan moved the gangs things to where they were on the playground.  For some reason the gang got very angry so then they started fighting (Ben, Carl and the gang) Jonathan on the other hand got a baseball bat (that Ben brought just in case they wanted to bat the ball around) and snuck behind the bullies, swung the bat on the all their heads, all of them got knocked out.  

Plot (Major sequence of events in order … the action)

Beginning

Middle

Ending

  •  One day Ben, Carl and Jonathan decided to go to the park nearby.
  • Out of nowhere a gang of bullies was there.
  • But there things were everywhere in the playground.
  • So Ben, Carl and Jonathan moved the gangs things to where they were on the playground.  
  • For some reason the gang got very angry so then they started fighting (Ben, Carl and the gang).
  • Jonathan on the other hand got a baseball bat (that Ben brought just in case they wanted to bat the ball around).  
  • Snuck behind the bullies, swung the bat on the all their heads.
  • All of them got knocked out.  
  • Suddenly there was a gigantic space like portal that sucked all of them in including the bullies.

  • The boys were teleported 34 years in the future.
  • The gang were teleported 16 years in the past.
  • The gang and boys will struggle to do basic everyday life tasks  except Jonathan.
  • They don’t know that they will be teleported back in 50 years and will lose everything they have accomplished and lose all their possessions but not their memory but if they can act norman of 1 week they will have their accomplished and their possessions.
  • Another thing they don’t know is that if they can fit properly for one whole day.
  • They do know that if they want to stay there forever all you have to do is drink the water that you were provided when you got teleported there so you either chose family and friend or surprises in their new world.

  • The whole gang got used to the past and decided to stay in the past forever.
  • The boys all decided to use the valuable information to help their past selves and the people there.

Solution/Resolution (How the problem got solved)

They got separated into the past and future.

Theme/Author's  message (What can you learn from the story? How should the characters avoid this problem in the future?)

Always think before you do.

Reflection

Something I found tricky was thinking of ideas

Something I found easy was picking my major and minor characters.

My next step is to think of good ideas.