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Beginning

  • Setting
  • What can you
  •  See?
  • Time
  • Place the
  • At
  • Weather
  • Characters
  • Names
  • Important details
  • Hook
  • Give a hint about the problem
  • The man's holding a chair
  • Going to smash the bump

  • 12.00 pm
  • mans house

Raning

Jeff

Dark scary shadow

The man gets scared of a dark shadow

Introduce the problem

  • Tell the topic/ time/ place/ person

A man is scared of a shadow. 12 o'clock. at his house. Jeff

Develop problem

  • Change the time/ place/ person/ topic

2 O'clock am. at his house. Jeff. A Demon in his house haunting him

Solution

  • How did the character solve the problem?

He got his cross out and as it was attacking him he put the cross on the demands forehead

Picture

One rainy Friday night Jeff was having his dinner, all was quiet,  suddenly he felt a shiver run down his spine. Then he heard a shaking noise, he thought it was an earthquake but he realised only the lamp table was moving and there was a bump inside the carpet in the shape of a human like face. The demon was knocking the table over with its horns, so Jeff quickly got of his chair and picked it  up, he started smashing the the demon with the chair. He smashed it several times until it moved into another position, he kept on smashing it, then it came out of the carpet and revealed its true form. Jeff ran up stairs, the demon caught up with him, he grabbed his shotgun and shot the demon ten times but nothing worked. As the demon was sucking out his soul jeff took his cross of his neck and put it on the demon's forehead. The demon went to anther house and Jeff ate the rest of his dinner. He never saw a demon again.