Wednesday 10th February 2016.
On sunday we went for a barbecue with my mum and dad and my family. my dad cooked the barbecue.
Why did you give the score?
I didn’t have that many ideas.
Structure and Language
I can tell my readers when my story happened.
My story makes sense.
I can write sentences that makes sense.
I used everyday words.
I am using some fullstops.
I can spell some words correctly.
List something that you think you did well in this text.
I wrote sentences that made sense.
What do you need to work on to improve your writing?
I need to use interesting words. I need to use full stops and capital letters correctly.