Final Memoir Writing Task:
As we go through life we all have experiences that shape us, teach us, or show us who we are. What has life taught you? How have you learned those lessons? Who has impacted your life the most? These are the moments that become memoirs, the emotions that shape our personalities and the realizations that shape our opinions. Write about an event in your life that has shaped you as a person, taught you something, or showed you how things really are. Word Count: 700 - 1000 words Due: Monday, October 3 |
1 = underdeveloped 2 = needs improvement 3 = proficient 4 = exceeds expectations
Copy and paste this rubric into your paper. Score yourself. Highlight best examples in your paper.
Attribute of memoir writing | Score | Evidence / Justification |
1. Structure: An interesting introduction captures attention. Events in the narrative (story) are logically organized and clearly described. | 0 1 2 3 4 | opening, background, vivid description of events? |
2. Language: Strong dialogue or description draws the reader into the story. The writer includes sensory details, strong diction, creates emotion. | 0 1 2 3 4 | Highlight your 4 strongest examples in blue font |
3. Reflection: The writer acknowledges the significance of the incident directly or indirectly. | 0 1 2 3 4 | Highlight or write 3 examples in purple |
4. Written consistently in the first person. Is free from grammar/spelling errors. | 0 1 2 3 4 | Did you edit? |
5. Is 700-800 words in length | 0 1 2 3 4 | word count is: |
6. 3 emotions are described directly or indirectly through dialogue, description of action, etc. | 0 1 2 3 4 | Highlight 3 examples of emotion in orange |
Score |
Why did I choose this story (my rationale) 1 paragraph -
What to Edit for
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4. Context - year, what was happening in the world that may influence this story? Setting: place create a cold, comforting atmosphere
5. Reflection / Realization- shows the significance / importance of the memory, what you learned or how you changed
6. Editing - Spelling and grammar is checked for complete sentences, parallel verbs
7. Emotions are shown through actions / internal & external dialogue
I was confused and shocked
The moment made my head spin and my mouth stood open in amazement as I took in the scene before me.