First Draft - Feedback

"Good, flowed well, loved the music with it, sound effects could've been better and more realistic, use different camera angles e.g. POV shot, when he looks in the mirror you could have it like the camera is the mirror. Overall, the clips worked well together and the narrative is clear through the use of certain elements." - Lily King

"Regarding feedback for your Decisions film I really like it, the jump cuts work well and the atmospheric sound is effective and so are the sound effects. However, maybe rearrange the toothbrush sound effects as it doesn't really match up right and maybe too loud, but altogether good work!" - Izzy Wiltshire