Student name: ___________________________
IELTS Task 2: Teacher Feedback Form (2nd Form)
Paragraphing:
Yes | see comments | |
Is your essay divided into clear paragraphs (with line breaks in between the paragraphs)? | ||
Do you have an introduction? | ||
Do you have a conclusion? | ||
Do you have between two or three body paragraphs? |
Introduction Paragraph Structure:
Yes | see comments | |
Is the first sentence a general statement about the topic? | ||
Following the general statement, do you transition to the specific question? | ||
Does the final sentence of your introduction contain the main idea of your essay? |
Body Paragraph Structure:
| Yes | see comments |
Does each body paragraph start with a clear topic sentence, which give the main idea of the paragraph? | ||
Does every other sentence in the paragraph relate to the main idea in the topic sentence? | ||
Is the topic sentence supported by supporting ideas and examples? |
Conclusion:
Which type of essay did you write: Choose only one. | Yes | see comments | |
Agree and Disagree: Both sides | Did you introduce your own opinion in the conclusion? | ||
Agree and Disagree: One Sided | Did you introduce your own opinion in the introduction, and then restate it in the conclusion using different words? | ||
Other types of essays | Did you restate your opinions from the previous paragraphs in the conclusion using different words? | ||
For all essay types: | |||
Did you remember not to include any new information in your conclusion? | |||
Active/Passive
Yes | see comments | |
Did you correctly choose the active or passive verb for each sentence? | ||
In passive verbs, did you remember to use the “be +V3” form? | ||
If the verb is not in the passive or continuous tense, you do not need to use a "be" verb. Check to make sure there are no extra “be” verbs in your essay. |
Parts of speech
Yes | see comments | |
Go through the paper and make sure all the words are being correctly used as the appropriate part of speech. |
Length
Good job | Too short (You must write at least 250 words, or you will lose points) | Too long (You won’t lose any points if your essay is too long, but in the exam you will lose valuable time.) |
Comments
Error Correction Codes
Code | Meaning | Example | Correction |
A | Wrong Article | A [A]moon goes around a [A] earth. | The moon goes around the earth. |
^A | Missing Article | [^A] Man looked funny. | The man looked funny. |
Pr | Wrong Preposition | I'm interested of [Pr] science. | I'm interested in science. |
^Pr | Missing Preposition | The rabbit jumped [^Pr] the hole. | The rabbit jumped into the hole. |
WW | Wrong Word (Or Several Wrong Words) | The man ate breakfast [WW] in the evening. | The man ate dinner in the evening. |
^ | Missing Word | This is the man [^] hit me. | This is the man who hit me. |
^^ | Two or More Missing Words or Missing Phrase | I got hit [^^] car. | I got hit by a car. |
^S | Missing Subject | [^S] will be good. | It will be good. |
^V | Missing Verb | Being a radio star [^V] | Being a radio star will be fun. |
WS | Wrong Part of Speech | I'm very interested in financial [WS]. | I'm very interested in finances. |
N | Number/ Singular or Plural problem. | I like cat [N]. | I like cats. |
VT | Verb Tense Problem | He kick [VT] me yesterday. | He kicked me yesterday. |
VF | Verb Form Problem | I've gotten used to eat [VF] here every day. | I've gotten used to eating here every day. |
AP | Active Passive Verb Problem | A lot of problems experience [AP] here every day. | A lot of problems are experienced here every day. |
SV | Subject Verb Agreement Problem | He like [SV] dogs. | He likes dogs. |
P | Punctuation Problem or Spacing Problem | Do you like dogs. [P] | Do you like dogs? |
C | Capitalization Problem | I'm from america. [C] | I'm from America. |
Po | Possessive Form Problem | The students [Po] homework was finished at last. | The students' homework was finished at last. |
SF | Sentence Fragment | The best thing about fast food [SF] | The best thing about fast food is the price. |
F | Form--Countable, uncountable, or other grammatical errors | I have a lot of homeworks [F]. | I have a lot of homework. |
G | Other Grammatical Problem | ||
WO | Word Order | He away walked [WO]. | He walked away. |
Sp | Spelling Problem | I like to eat peeza [Sp]. | I like to eat pizza. |
?? | I Don't Understand What You Mean | ||
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