Draft 2

The Fabulous Meal

Yesterday morning on the tip of my bed

I smelt cheese filling the house. I woke

and tip toe to the kitchen and… there it is,

the amazing PIZZA! I took a bite. It

was as delicious as white chocolate.

Then another slice of pizza very fast

because the cheese dropping down

as fast as a rain drop! Time after time

I finished the pizza. I was as full as a

rugby ball!

Draft 1

The Fabulous Meal

Yesterday morning on the tip of my bed

I smelt cheese filling the house. I woke

and tip toe to the kitchen and… there it is,

the amazing PIZZA! I took a bite. It

was as delicious as white chocolate.

Then another slice of pizza very fast

because the cheese dropping down

as fast as a rain drop! Time after time

I finished the pizza. I was as full as a

rugby ball!