WALT: Write a description

WILF:

• Use interesting or scientific vocabulary
• Use similes/metaphors/personification
• Describe what you might see, hear, smell or feel
• Paragraphs
• Use no more than 150 words

Plan:

see- panels, 100s of them, sand, old house

hear-buzzing, wind, sand hitting things

Smell- saggy, Salty sand, cooking, Perfume (Camera)

Feel- Sand, hot

Simile- Hot as a heated oven

Metaphor- 100s of panels

Personification- hundreds of rubrik cubes looking at the sun with its black eyes.

Description:

100s of panels, Hundreds of half broken black rubik cubes staring at the sun with its anonymous black eyes. I can see sand and a old looking house at the back of the (rubik cube) panels

Buzzing Bee noises. I can hear the wind rushing at me (WHSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH) and i could also hear the sand hitting the panels (making clang noises).

Delicious smelling food. I can smell the saggy, salty sand. I can also smell the perfume i put on my camera.

Hard sand hitting me while taking a picture of the panels. I can feel the sun shining at me. It is as hot as a fully powered oven (1BIL degrees). I can feel thousands and millions of sand hitting me.

Finished? Check your word count then use the editing slides to improve your work.