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ENGLISH II PERSUASIVE RESEARCH PAPER
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PERSUASIVE ELEMENTS
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ThesisOne statement that thoroughly introduces the argumentMore than one sentence that thoroughly introduces the argumentMore than one sentence and does not clearly state the argument.There is no thesis
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LogosAuthor includes at least one example of logos and correctly labels itThey author includes at least one example of logos but does not correctly label it.There are no examples of logos in the paper.
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EthosAuthor includes at least one example of ethos and correctly labels itThey author includes at least one example of ethos but does not correctly label it.There are no examples of ethos in the paper.
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PathosAuthor includes at least one example of pathos and correctly labels itThey author includes at least one example of pathos but does not correctly label it.There are no examples of pathos in the paper.
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PersuasiveThe essay is persuasive throughout with no lapses to informativeThe essay is quite persuasive but does lapse to informativeThe entire paper is informative
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MLA FORMATTING
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Citations
(Format)
Includes all citations, using the correct formatInformation is cited but not using the correct format consistently
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Citations (Complete)All citations in the essay are listed in the Works Cited and vice versa.A citation or two is missing from the Works Cited or the essay.
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FormatThe essay is 2-5 pages long in TNR font, double spacedThe essay does not follow the required format.
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QuotationsAll quotations are formatted correctly. (Those over four lines are indented ten spaces and double spaced.)Author includes quotations, but they are not all formatted correctlyAuthor uses no quotations
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OutlineEssay includes a copy of a correctly formatted outline.Essay includes copy of outline with some formatting errors.Essay does not include a copy of the outline.
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Works CitedEssay includes a copy of a correctly formatted works cited.Essay includes copy of works cited with some formatting errors.Essay does not include a copy of the works cited.
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6 Traits (plus some extra components)
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IntroductionIntroduction is especially interesting and previews the structure of the paperIntroduction is quite interesting and reviews the structure of the paperIntroduction is somewhat interesting and previews the structure of the paperIntroduction previews the structure of the paper but is not particularly interestingIntroduction barely previews the structure of the paper and is not particularly interestingThere is no introduction
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IdeasThe body paragraphs provide extensive discussion to support the thesis, including quotationsThe body of the essay provides a great deal of discussion to support the thesis, including quotationsThe body of the essay provides an adequate amount of discussion to support the thesis, including quotationsThe body of the essay provides some discussion to support the thesis, including quotationsThe body of the essay provides some discussion to support the thesis but does not include quotationsThe body of the essay hardly provides discussion to support the thesis
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OrganizationContent of paper is organized in a logical manner with no detail out of placeContent of paper is organized in a fairly logical manner with a detail or two out of placeContent of paper is organized in a somewhat logical manner with a detail or two out of placeContent of paper is somewhat organized, but many details seem to be out of placeContent of paper is poorly organized with many details out of placeContent of paper does not seem to be organized. Random ideas seem to be thrown together
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Sentence FluencyAuthor uses varying sentence structure with no run-ons or sentence fragmentsAuthor uses varying sentence structure with one run-on or sentence fragmentAuthor uses varying sentence structure with a couple of run-ons or sentence fragmentsAuthor uses varying sentence structure with more than five run-ons or fragmentsAuthor does not use varying sentence structure, but does not have any run-ons or sentence fragmentsAuthor does not use varying sentence structure and has run-ons or sentence fragments
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Word ChoiceAuthor uses precise word choice and usage, and sophisticated languageAuthor uses precise word choice and usage, but the language is not terribly sophisticatedAuthor uses adequate language with few errors in precision of word choice and usageAuthor uses adequate language with many errors in precision of word choice and usageAuthor uses limited language with many errors in precision of word choice and usageAuthor demonstrates an inadequate command of vocabulary
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VoiceAuthor uses formal language appropriate for a formal paper and uses only 3rd person voiceAuthor uses formal language appropriate for a formal paper and uses 1st or 2nd person voice once or twiceAuthor uses formal language appropriate for a formal paper but uses 1st or 2nd person voice a few timesAuthor uses formal language appropriate for a formal paper but uses 1st or 2nd person voice many timesAuthor uses informal language not appropriate for a formal paper and uses 1st or 2nd person voice many timesPaper reads more conversational and less like a formal paper
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TransitionsAuthor uses a variety of transitions to effectively make a fluid movement and connection between different aspects of the paperAuthor uses similar transitions fairly effectively to make fluid movement and connection between different aspects of the paperAuthor uses similar transitions that aren’t terribly effectiveAuthor does not use transitions
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ConventionsAuthor does not make any errors in spelling or punctuationAuthor makes a few errors in spelling or punctuation, but none distract from the content of the paperAuthor makes a few errors in spelling or punctuation that distract from the content of the paperAuthor makes many errors in spelling or punctuation that distract from the content of the paper
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ConclusionConclusion is extremely interesting and effectively wraps up the paper without introducing a new pointConclusion is extremely interesting and effectively wraps up the paper but introduces a new pointConclusion is fairly interesting and effectively wraps up the paperConclusion is repetitive and not terribly interesting but effectively wraps up the paperConclusion is repetitive and not terribly interesting and leaves loose ends in the paperThere is no recognizable conclusion in the paper
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