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2 | BookBaby | @FirstEditing Our pleasure! Talk soon! :) #bbchat | 09/12/2015 22:04:07 |
3 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: And thanks to BookBaby! It is great working with you and your clients. Wonderful sharing a Mutual passion for Words! #bbc… | 09/12/2015 22:03:41 |
4 | JLenniDorner | RT @BookBaby: Welcome to the December edition of #BBchat! Today we're discussing Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! Join us 4-5pm ET. | 09/12/2015 22:03:35 |
5 | literaryeti | RT @FirstEditing: A11 If you are serious about publishing, you need to be serious about editing. First editing – then publishing. Don’t ski… | 09/12/2015 22:03:27 |
6 | literaryeti | RT @BookBaby: Q11. How important is it to invest in outside, professional help to review your manuscript and prepare it for publishing? #BB… | 09/12/2015 22:03:20 |
7 | literaryeti | RT @FirstEditing: A6 Changing verb tenses can be confusing, so it’s important to stay consistent the entire way through. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 22:03:07 |
8 | literaryeti | RT @BookBaby: Q6. When it comes to checking your verb tenses, what’s the best way for finding inconsistencies? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 22:03:02 |
9 | literaryeti | RT @FirstEditing: A5 Finding crutch words requires human eyes to see the repetition. So start with a fresh re-read. Take notes. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 22:02:50 |
10 | literaryeti | RT @BookBaby: Q5. How do you find your “crutch” words? Is it as simple as “Find and Replace” on Word? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 22:02:36 |
11 | FirstEditing | And thanks to BookBaby! It is great working with you and your clients. Wonderful sharing a Mutual passion for Words! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 22:02:36 |
12 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: Thanks so much for letting us join your group today! Let us know if we can be of assistance now or in the future! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 22:01:02 |
13 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: Thanks so much for letting us join your group today! Let us know if we can be of assistance now or in the future! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 22:01:02 |
14 | FirstEditing | Thanks so much for letting us join your group today! Let us know if we can be of assistance now or in the future! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 22:00:52 |
15 | BookBaby | @TripawdMom It always does! Thanks again for your questions and insights! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 22:00:40 |
16 | FirstEditing | @TripawdMom Good advice. Keep it protected. Transfer securely. NDA. That is the professional standard. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 22:00:23 |
17 | BookBaby | If you have a minute, we would love any feedback you have about #BBchat! Here’s the link again: https://t.co/Xi4mCC0zbs | 09/12/2015 22:00:13 |
18 | TripawdMom | Thanks! The hour just flew right by! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 22:00:12 |
19 | BookBaby | If you would like to be reminded about the next #BBchat, please sign up here: https://t.co/KfAlkMNNw4 | 09/12/2015 21:59:58 |
20 | AuthZH | @FirstEditing thank you! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:59:48 |
21 | BookBaby | Thanks everyone for joining this month’s #BBchat and thank you to @FirstEditing for chatting! | 09/12/2015 21:59:46 |
22 | FirstEditing | @AuthZH Just so that you can get some feedback from the right people AND not overwhelm them the first time. If you connect, share #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:59:30 |
23 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: @AuthZH That is really a matter of Comfort. Some people boldly share while others protect. If it is for a Group, start wi… | 09/12/2015 21:59:17 |
24 | TripawdMom | I would personally be too "cautious" (read paranoid) to post anything online. I'd go with a Pro. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:58:59 |
25 | FirstEditing | @AuthZH That is really a matter of Comfort. Some people boldly share while others protect. If it is for a Group, start with 350 word #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:58:44 |
26 | AuthZH | @BookBaby @FirstEditing how much of our stories should we post online? #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:57:23 |
27 | BookBaby | Q12. Any last questions for us or @FirstEditing? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:57:04 |
28 | BookBaby | @bravrayj You're welcome and thanks for stopping by! I'm about to open the floor for questions. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:56:28 |
29 | FirstEditing | @bravrayj It was a pleasure! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:56:20 |
30 | FirstEditing | @EA_Hennessy Nice chatting with you! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:56:06 |
31 | bravrayj | Thanks for all the editing advice. #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:55:59 |
32 | FirstEditing | @TripawdMom Yes, Reviews are very revealing. Look for the amount of Reviews that an editor can provide. Not just the good ones. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:55:51 |
33 | BookBaby | @EA_Hennessy Thanks, Liz! See you next time. :) #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:55:34 |
34 | EA_Hennessy | Have to sign off but loved this #BBchat ! | 09/12/2015 21:55:13 |
35 | SpatzSteven | RT @FirstEditing: A11 If you are serious about publishing, you need to be serious about editing. First editing – then publishing. Don’t ski… | 09/12/2015 21:55:08 |
36 | FirstEditing | @AnnHeitland We will gladly sign any non-disclosure brought to us by the client. It is less complicated. We always guarantee privacy #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:54:50 |
37 | TripawdMom | A11. Especially with the sometimes nasty online reviews, it's so important to put your best word forward. Edit! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:54:39 |
38 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A11 From friends & colleagues to online programs to writer forums to the final edit from a professional editor. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:53:56 |
39 | EA_Hennessy | RT @FirstEditing: A11 If you are serious about publishing, you need to be serious about editing. First editing – then publishing. Don’t ski… | 09/12/2015 21:53:54 |
40 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A11 Publishing takes your work and makes it PUBLIC. There is no turning back after that point. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:53:46 |
41 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A11 If you are serious about publishing, you need to be serious about editing. First editing – then publishing. Don’t ski… | 09/12/2015 21:53:41 |
42 | FirstEditing | A11 From friends & colleagues to online programs to writer forums to the final edit from a professional editor. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:53:23 |
43 | AnnHeitland | @FirstEditing @EA_Hennessy Do you have a standard non-disclosure agreement or do your authors come to you with their own? #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:53:14 |
44 | FirstEditing | A11 So edit. Get as much help as you can . #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:53:12 |
45 | FirstEditing | A11 Publishing takes your work and makes it PUBLIC. There is no turning back after that point. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:53:02 |
46 | FirstEditing | A11 If you are serious about publishing, you need to be serious about editing. First editing – then publishing. Don’t skip steps. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:52:38 |
47 | BookBaby | Q11. How important is it to invest in outside, professional help to review your manuscript and prepare it for publishing? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:52:04 |
48 | BookBaby | RT @EA_Hennessy: @BookBaby I'll pick a specific aspect to focus on eg consistent character development or searching for passive words #BBch… | 09/12/2015 21:51:55 |
49 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A10 You don’t have to do the entire book this way, but it is a fun way to take a new perspective on your very familiar te… | 09/12/2015 21:51:51 |
50 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A10 Print it out. Edit pages out of order for fun. I’ve even had writers edit backwards by reading each sentence separate… | 09/12/2015 21:51:42 |
51 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A10 Take the first step. Get a sample edit of your writing to show you how important editing is for you. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:50:32 |
52 | FirstEditing | @EA_Hennessy Yes, excellent. Do whatever it takes to get started. Passive verbs are a great starting Point. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:50:06 |
53 | EA_Hennessy | @BookBaby editing an entire manuscript feels less intimidating to me this way, broken into pieces #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:49:37 |
54 | EA_Hennessy | @BookBaby I'll pick a specific aspect to focus on eg consistent character development or searching for passive words #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:49:06 |
55 | FirstEditing | A10 You don’t have to do the entire book this way, but it is a fun way to take a new perspective on your very familiar text. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:47:59 |
56 | FirstEditing | A10 Print it out. Edit pages out of order for fun. I’ve even had writers edit backwards by reading each sentence separately. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:47:49 |
57 | FirstEditing | A10 Run a basic spell & grammar check. It helps to get started. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:47:35 |
58 | FirstEditing | A10 Take the first step. Get a sample edit of your writing to show you how important editing is for you. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:47:22 |
59 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: @EA_Hennessy Smart. Protect your baby. We gladly sign non-disclosures when editing books. It just makes sense for everyon… | 09/12/2015 21:47:17 |
60 | BookBaby | Q10. What are some ways to beat self-editor’s block and speed up the re-writing process? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:47:03 |
61 | FirstEditing | @EA_Hennessy Smart. Protect your baby. We gladly sign non-disclosures when editing books. It just makes sense for everyone. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:46:39 |
62 | EA_Hennessy | @FirstEditing @TripawdMom I have a signed contract with my editor that includes such issues #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:45:47 |
63 | FirstEditing | @TripawdMom Yes, you can Always have a non-disclosure agreement, if you have concerns. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:44:47 |
64 | FirstEditing | @EA_Hennessy Exactly. Your genre is super important. Connect with writers similar to you and ask them. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:44:09 |
65 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A9 But building a platform of followers and readers is vital to marketing your book. You can never start too early. #bbch… | 09/12/2015 21:44:07 |
66 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A9 Hiring a proofreader or editor is the easiest method if you want to save time and frustration. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:44:05 |
67 | TripawdMom | Some of my authors are concerned about copyrighted materials and non-disclosure from their editor/reader. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:43:57 |
68 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A9 Plus, marketing yourself to have them read your work. So be prepared to ask and wait. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:43:44 |
69 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A9 It all depends how much time you can invest. This will require lots of interaction. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:43:35 |
70 | AuthZH | @FirstEditing How much should we post? #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:43:21 |
71 | BookBaby | RT @EA_Hennessy: @BookBaby Ask in forums/groups/etc related to your genre or target audience #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:43:21 |
72 | FirstEditing | A9 But building a platform of followers and readers is vital to marketing your book. You can never start too early. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:43:19 |
73 | FirstEditing | A9 Hiring a proofreader or editor is the easiest method if you want to save time and frustration. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:43:08 |
74 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A9 Beta readers can be found in various writing clubs, author groups, online forums, various websites, etc. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:43:07 |
75 | FirstEditing | A9 Plus, marketing yourself to have them read your work. So be prepared to ask and wait. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:42:55 |
76 | FirstEditing | A9 It all depends how much time you can invest. This will require lots of interaction. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:42:45 |
77 | EA_Hennessy | @BookBaby Ask in forums/groups/etc related to your genre or target audience #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:42:37 |
78 | FirstEditing | A9 If you have a blog, post access there. Email your people to read it. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:42:36 |
79 | FirstEditing | RT @SpatzSteven: Here's a recent BB blog post about the pitfalls of NOT having your book edited! https://t.co/8YngWWveZO #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:42:23 |
80 | BookBaby | RT @SpatzSteven: Here's a recent BB blog post about the pitfalls of NOT having your book edited! https://t.co/8YngWWveZO #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:42:20 |
81 | FirstEditing | A9 Beta readers can be found in various writing clubs, author groups, online forums, various websites, etc. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:42:16 |
82 | BookBaby | Q9. How do you find beta readers who fit your target audience and can make informed suggestions about your writing? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:42:06 |
83 | SpatzSteven | Here's a recent BB blog post about the pitfalls of NOT having your book edited! https://t.co/8YngWWveZO #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:41:56 |
84 | FirstEditing | @TripawdMom Yes, a common part of the journey in editing one's book.... #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:40:09 |
85 | BookBaby | @EA_Hennessy @TripawdMom It's true! Last month @LiteraryLiving talked about how she uses her writing group as a resource. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:39:37 |
86 | TripawdMom | Right...not that I'm not nice... :-) #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:39:09 |
87 | EA_Hennessy | @TripawdMom Friends def can be too nice, you need an objective eye at some point :) #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:38:49 |
88 | BookBaby | RT @TripawdMom: Some of my authors have come to me for editing after realizing their family and friends were being too nice. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:38:41 |
89 | FirstEditing | @EA_Hennessy Great! Always get all the help you can! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:38:30 |
90 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A8 Friends & family can never be completely honest or professional with you. Get a neutral editor for helpful criticism &… | 09/12/2015 21:38:30 |
91 | BookBaby | RT @EA_Hennessy: @BookBaby I had some friends as beta readers, they were my writing-inclined friends though; found it very helpful #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:38:20 |
92 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A8 Sure, you can always ask for help. The more eyes on your writing BEFORE publication – the better! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:38:13 |
93 | TripawdMom | Some of my authors have come to me for editing after realizing their family and friends were being too nice. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:38:05 |
94 | FirstEditing | A8 Friends & family can never be completely honest or professional with you. Get a neutral editor for helpful criticism & insight. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:37:57 |
95 | EA_Hennessy | @BookBaby I had some friends as beta readers, they were my writing-inclined friends though; found it very helpful #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:37:49 |
96 | FirstEditing | A8 The important part is to make sure that you are actually getting honest feedback. Flow of your writing and such is #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:37:47 |
97 | FirstEditing | A8 Sure, you can always ask for help. The more eyes on your writing BEFORE publication – the better! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:37:36 |
98 | AuthZH | @BookBaby I second this question #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:37:33 |
99 | BookBaby | Q8. Is it helpful to share your writing with friends and family or is it best to leave it to the professionals? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:37:07 |
100 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: @BookBaby We specialize in cost effective editing. But, yes, we offer consultations for those seeking it. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:37:04 |
101 | FirstEditing | @BookBaby We specialize in cost effective editing. But, yes, we offer consultations for those seeking it. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:36:48 |
102 | TripawdMom | FirstEditing's editors sometimes specialize in certain genres, such as Young Adult or Christian writing. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:36:37 |
103 | BookBaby | And @FirstEditing can provide any of the above options? #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:35:59 |
104 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A7 OR an editor can hold your hand each step of the way with numerous revisions and consultations. Least cost effective. … | 09/12/2015 21:35:13 |
105 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A7 Editors can work independently and simply “fix” your writing and return it to you. Much more affordable. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:35:11 |
106 | EA_Hennessy | RT @FirstEditing: A7 I believe the editor’s EXPERIENCE with your GENRE is so important. It’s often more important than finding matching per… | 09/12/2015 21:34:11 |
107 | FirstEditing | A7 OR an editor can hold your hand each step of the way with numerous revisions and consultations. Least cost effective. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:33:49 |
108 | FirstEditing | A7 Editors can work independently and simply “fix” your writing and return it to you. Much more affordable. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:33:38 |
109 | Jenn_Mattern | RT @FirstEditing: A2 Avoid “writer’s goggles” where you can no longer see the writing. Come back fresh. Revising in January is a good recom… | 09/12/2015 21:33:37 |
110 | FirstEditing | A7 If you are unsure, get a free sample edit of your writing. The editor can advise on what level of editing you need. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:33:23 |
111 | FirstEditing | A7 Also, it is important to identify YOUR NEEDS. Clearly outline your concerns and instructions. This is SO important. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:33:10 |
112 | AnnHeitland | @FirstEditing how do you know the editor you find is qualified? Reference? #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:33:10 |
113 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A7 I believe the editor’s EXPERIENCE with your GENRE is so important. It’s often more important than finding matching per… | 09/12/2015 21:33:05 |
114 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A7 Finding an editor is dependent upon your personal wishes, your writing style and your overall goals. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:33:03 |
115 | FirstEditing | A7 I believe the editor’s EXPERIENCE with your GENRE is so important. It’s often more important than finding matching personalities #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:32:58 |
116 | FirstEditing | A7 Finding an editor is dependent upon your personal wishes, your writing style and your overall goals. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:32:16 |
117 | BookBaby | Q7. There are many different kinds of editors available, so how do you identify what kind you need? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:32:03 |
118 | AuthZH | @BookBaby @FirstEditing Wasn't expecting anything less :D #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:31:19 |
119 | FirstEditing | @AnnHeitland @dudas_lori yes - and you can use the back of old documents if you want to recycle and save trees... #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:30:52 |
120 | AuthZH | @dudas_lori @AnnHeitland I have a friend who does this. I have yet to do it, but it sounds good #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:30:49 |
121 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A6 But remember – there are limitations with computer programs. Many common grammar errors are still overlooked. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:29:44 |
122 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A6 Changing verb tenses can be confusing, so it’s important to stay consistent the entire way through. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:29:25 |
123 | BookBaby | @AuthZH It looks like @FirstEditing has some good answers for you! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:29:13 |
124 | AnnHeitland | @dudas_lori Upload your document to Office Max print or another laser print service. Less expense than printing at home with ink #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:29:04 |
125 | FirstEditing | A6 You will need help with such errors. A human brain to help. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:28:43 |
126 | FirstEditing | A6 AND - Incorrect use of the possessive apostrophe; Pronoun agreement error; Run-on sentence; Sentence fragment, etc. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:28:32 |
127 | FirstEditing | A6 AND - Missing preposition; Comma splice; No comma in a compound sentence; Vague pronoun references; Tense shift; #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:28:19 |
128 | FirstEditing | A6 Computers miss errors such as: No comma after an introductory element #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:28:08 |
129 | FirstEditing | A6 But remember – there are limitations with computer programs. Many common grammar errors are still overlooked. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:27:56 |
130 | TripawdMom | I'm a big proponent of writing in past tense. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:27:55 |
131 | FirstEditing | A6 https://t.co/Hpv8ALju6r #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:27:43 |
132 | FirstEditing | A6 Begin with a grammar checker such as Microsoft Word. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:27:31 |
133 | FirstEditing | A6 Changing verb tenses can be confusing, so it’s important to stay consistent the entire way through. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:27:19 |
134 | AuthZH | @BookBaby I have SUCH a problem with this #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:27:15 |
135 | BookBaby | Q6. When it comes to checking your verb tenses, what’s the best way for finding inconsistencies? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:27:02 |
136 | FirstEditing | @ bravrayj yes, use helpful Writing Tools - use Everything you can to be successful! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:26:51 |
137 | BookBaby | @FirstEditing Agreed on using every tool you can, even @SpatzSteven's cat! Plenty of room for improvement for me at least. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:26:45 |
138 | BookBaby | @FirstEditing Agreed on using every tool you can, even @SpatzSteven's cat! Plenty of room for improvement for me at least. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:26:45 |
139 | BookBaby | @AuthZH @bravrayj @EA_Hennessy Yes, Scrivener is great for having that feature! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:24:10 |
140 | FirstEditing | A5 Use all the tools you can. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:24:04 |
141 | FirstEditing | A5 And free editing software programs online can scan your writing and find words you’re over-using and which are too passive #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:23:45 |
142 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A5 Give your editor the list of potential crutch words so they can assist with rewrites, substitutions, elimination, etc.… | 09/12/2015 21:23:25 |
143 | AuthZH | @bravrayj @BookBaby I did not know that! I will definitely use that feature #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:23:22 |
144 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A5 Have another person or group of persons read your book. Ask them to be aware & point out crutch words. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:23:15 |
145 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A5 Finding crutch words requires human eyes to see the repetition. So start with a fresh re-read. Take notes. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:23:08 |
146 | EA_Hennessy | @BookBaby I really like Scrivener for this, it has a feature that finds overused words #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:23:03 |
147 | BookBaby | @EA_Hennessy @dudas_lori It's funny because it's true... ;) #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:22:55 |
148 | FirstEditing | A5 Give your editor the list of potential crutch words so they can assist with rewrites, substitutions, elimination, etc. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:22:50 |
149 | bravrayj | @BookBaby Scrivener has a feature where you can find how many times you use words in your document. #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:22:48 |
150 | FirstEditing | A5 Have another person or group of persons read your book. Ask them to be aware & point out crutch words. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:22:35 |
151 | EA_Hennessy | @dudas_lori do the opposite of what you'd do in school to make your reports look longer ;) #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:22:33 |
152 | FirstEditing | A5 Finding crutch words requires human eyes to see the repetition. So start with a fresh re-read. Take notes. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:22:23 |
153 | BookBaby | Q5. How do you find your “crutch” words? Is it as simple as “Find and Replace” on Word? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:22:06 |
154 | pmartinauthor | RT @BookBaby: @FirstEditing And I have to say, when Heather submitted her guest blog post to me, seeing her tracked changes was SO helpful!… | 09/12/2015 21:21:16 |
155 | FirstEditing | @agru Chicago manual of style for fiction/non-fiction is the standard... #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:21:16 |
156 | FirstEditing | @bravrayj Yes - and it is Amazing what you suddenly hear in your Writing... #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:20:16 |
157 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A4 “You force yourself to notice everything from spelling and word choice to the structure of sentences.” #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:19:44 |
158 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A4 “Often, when we read silently, our eyes skip over small errors, awkward or run-on sentences, and typos.” #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:19:41 |
159 | bravrayj | Reading it out loud could give you a new view on things that sound odd spoken. #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:19:23 |
160 | FirstEditing | A4 “You can also have someone read your paper aloud and tell you where they are confused.” #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:19:17 |
161 | EA_Hennessy | RT @FirstEditing: A4 https://t.co/C7J6em4rgl #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:19:12 |
162 | BookBaby | RT @SpatzSteven: I did the read out loud thing of my book over a rainy Labor Day weekend. My cat turned out to be a poor audience. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:19:05 |
163 | FirstEditing | A4 https://t.co/C7J6em4rgl #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:19:04 |
164 | EA_Hennessy | RT @FirstEditing: A4 “Often, when we read silently, our eyes skip over small errors, awkward or run-on sentences, and typos.” #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:19:00 |
165 | FirstEditing | A4 “You force yourself to notice everything from spelling and word choice to the structure of sentences.” #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:18:51 |
166 | FirstEditing | A4 “Often, when we read silently, our eyes skip over small errors, awkward or run-on sentences, and typos.” #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:18:34 |
167 | bravrayj | @BookBaby Printing can be expensive to do. #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:18:27 |
168 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A4 This helps you hear what your readers are seeing for the first time. First impressions matter. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:18:24 |
169 | FirstEditing | A4 especially when meeting your characters... #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:18:20 |
170 | SpatzSteven | I did the read out loud thing of my book over a rainy Labor Day weekend. My cat turned out to be a poor audience. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:18:19 |
171 | BookBaby | @bravrayj No worries at all, Janine! Happy to have you join us today for #BBchat. | 09/12/2015 21:18:06 |
172 | FirstEditing | A4 This helps you hear what your readers are seeing for the first time. First impressions matter. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:18:01 |
173 | AuthZH | @BookBaby I find a lot of run-on and clunky sentences that way. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:17:44 |
174 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A4 When you read the words out loud, it engages a different part of your brain. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:17:42 |
175 | bravrayj | #BBchat Sorry I’m late, but I’m planning to revise a bunch next year. I let it rest so I can look at it with fresh eyes. | 09/12/2015 21:17:31 |
176 | FirstEditing | A4 When you read the words out loud, it engages a different part of your brain. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:17:18 |
177 | AuthZH | @BookBaby @EA_Hennessy If there are things I already know what needs to be fixed, I'll do that on the computer before printing out #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:17:08 |
178 | BookBaby | Q4. What benefit does reading your manuscript out loud offer? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:17:02 |
179 | agru | What's the preferred style guide to use when editing? #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:16:37 |
180 | FirstEditing | @EA_Hennessy Agreed! Do what works for you. Most importantly just get the editing done... #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:16:04 |
181 | BookBaby | @EA_Hennessy @AuthZH I like printed out too, I just feel badly about the paper sometimes! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:16:01 |
182 | BookBaby | @FirstEditing And I have to say, when Heather submitted her guest blog post to me, seeing her tracked changes was SO helpful! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:14:11 |
183 | FirstEditing | @AuthZH Yes - I agree. Print it out when reviewing your own work. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:14:10 |
184 | EA_Hennessy | @BookBaby I like to edit electronically for more developmental stuff, then print for smaller details #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:13:39 |
185 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A3 When working with an editor, make sure it is electronically edited with the changes clearly outlined. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:13:30 |
186 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A3 For personal re-reading & editing of your own writing – print it out. Changing to a tactile reading experience is stim… | 09/12/2015 21:13:25 |
187 | FirstEditing | A3 Using Microsoft’s Track Changes is ideal for cooperative editing #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:13:01 |
188 | AuthZH | @BookBaby printed out. Gives my eyes a rest and allows me to pick up smaller details #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:12:57 |
189 | FirstEditing | A3 When working with an editor, make sure it is electronically edited with the changes clearly outlined. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:12:48 |
190 | FirstEditing | A3 For personal re-reading & editing of your own writing – print it out. Changing to a tactile reading experience is stimulating. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:12:30 |
191 | AuthZH | @BookBaby @AuthZH Oh, wow! I actually combined 3 books into 1 for the one I'm rewriting #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:12:18 |
192 | BookBaby | Q3. What’s your preferred medium/format for #editing? On the computer or printed out? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:12:03 |
193 | FirstEditing | @stevenspatz Great working with you! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:12:03 |
194 | SpatzSteven | @agru They did a line edit. It's a non fiction book - about self publishing. Really had a great eye for detail. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:11:59 |
195 | AuthZH | @EA_Hennessy I'm about to start Finals, so I can't find any time to write now. I'll be writing again next Wednesday, though! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:11:48 |
196 | wcmckeedotcom | RT @BookBaby: Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! https://t.co/w9… | 09/12/2015 21:11:40 |
197 | BookBaby | @AuthZH Ah okay, I see. School is tough enough as it is. It's looking like I have a trilogy on my hands... #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:11:39 |
198 | EA_Hennessy | @AuthZH I feel your pain, I have an 8-5 job to balance with my writing! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:10:35 |
199 | BookBaby | RT @SpatzSteven: Full disclosure - I had the fine folks at First Editing work on my own book. Did a marvelous job! SOOOO worth the investme… | 09/12/2015 21:10:34 |
200 | agru | @SpatzSteven What exactly did First Editing do? Developmental, critique, or line edits? #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:10:24 |
201 | AuthZH | i started writing a 2nd novel while I waited on the 1 I'm now editing, but with college, I can only work on 1 at a time #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:10:07 |
202 | FirstEditing | RT @SpatzSteven: Full disclosure - I had the fine folks at First Editing work on my own book. Did a marvelous job! SOOOO worth the investme… | 09/12/2015 21:10:07 |
203 | BookBaby | @AnnHeitland Welcome, Ann! Happy to have you join us today. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:10:04 |
204 | BookBaby | RT @EA_Hennessy: @BookBaby @NaNoWriMo I personally was exhausted by my novel after NaNo and HAD to take a break! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:09:40 |
205 | SpatzSteven | Full disclosure - I had the fine folks at First Editing work on my own book. Did a marvelous job! SOOOO worth the investment #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:09:39 |
206 | BookBaby | RT @AuthZH: @BookBaby @NaNoWriMo if we don't wait, we'll be too close to our novel and will miss errors we could otherwise catch #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:09:32 |
207 | BookBaby | RT @FirstEditing: A2 Avoid “writer’s goggles” where you can no longer see the writing. Come back fresh. Revising in January is a good recom… | 09/12/2015 21:09:21 |
208 | agru | I finished one book and am letting it sit while I write my second. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:09:16 |
209 | BookBaby | @KAKraft Hey Kirk! TWO novels! You've got me beat for sure. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:09:05 |
210 | lisa_amowitz | RT @BookBaby: Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! https://t.co/w9… | 09/12/2015 21:08:59 |
211 | lisa_amowitz | RT @BookBaby: 1 hour away! Today’s topic in #BBchat at 4pm ET: Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! https://t.co/MUv2OurYXR | 09/12/2015 21:08:59 |
212 | AnnHeitland | hello #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:08:52 |
213 | EA_Hennessy | @BookBaby @NaNoWriMo And it def helps be more objective with your story #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:08:42 |
214 | BookBaby | @agru Welcome to the chat! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:08:39 |
215 | KAKraft | I'm Kirk, currently revising two novels #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:08:18 |
216 | EA_Hennessy | @BookBaby @NaNoWriMo I personally was exhausted by my novel after NaNo and HAD to take a break! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:08:15 |
217 | FirstEditing | A2 Avoid “writer’s goggles” where you can no longer see the writing. Come back fresh. Revising in January is a good recommendation. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:08:13 |
218 | FirstEditing | A2 Give your brain time to disconnect. Relax. Refresh. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:07:58 |
219 | agru | Just made it over. Looking forward to good information. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:07:57 |
220 | FirstEditing | to take a step back... #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:07:43 |
221 | BookBaby | @scallen11 Welcome, Susan! Happy to have you with us today. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:07:41 |
222 | AuthZH | @BookBaby @NaNoWriMo if we don't wait, we'll be too close to our novel and will miss errors we could otherwise catch #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:07:39 |
223 | FirstEditing | A2 It takes time to get a new set of eyes on the first draft of a novel, and the only way to get that new set of editing eyes is #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:07:33 |
224 | BookBaby | Q2. @NaNoWriMo recommends waiting until January to make a “revision promise.” Why is it important to let your novel rest? #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:07:04 |
225 | scallen11 | Is it true semi-colons are passe? #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:06:59 |
226 | BookBaby | @SpatzSteven Hi Steven! Glad you could join us today. I know you have a lot of good things to say about editing! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:06:31 |
227 | AuthZH | @BookBaby @AuthZH so much work... but I know it's worth it :) #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:06:18 |
228 | BookBaby | @AuthZH Hey Zara! Welcome back. I too am currently rewriting the novel I started during #NaNoWriMo this year! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:05:42 |
229 | SpatzSteven | Hello! I would have been here earlier but I was editing my tweets. #bbchat. | 09/12/2015 21:05:05 |
230 | BookBaby | @TripawdMom Hello Lee Ann! We like to see new faces as well! Thanks for joining us today. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:04:54 |
231 | AuthZH | I'm here. currently rewriting a novel, but always listening for editing advice #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:04:53 |
232 | BookBaby | @EA_Hennessy Hi Liz! We love seeing familiar faces! #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:04:25 |
233 | TripawdMom | #bbchat Lee Ann the editor. I often get questions from clients about the publishing process so I'm here to learn. | 09/12/2015 21:03:52 |
234 | scallen11 | Sue in Virginia--first-time novelist. #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:03:39 |
235 | EA_Hennessy | @BookBaby Liz here! I'm currently editing my novel to be published in March! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:03:38 |
236 | BookBaby | Q1. Who's with us today in #BBchat? Please introduce yourself and let the conversation begin! | 09/12/2015 21:03:04 |
237 | BookBaby | If you have any feedback to share afterwards about #BBchat, we have a short survey here: https://t.co/Xi4mCC0zbs | 09/12/2015 21:02:35 |
238 | BookBaby | We encourage you to visit her website after the chat! https://t.co/LtVjd07GNB #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:02:04 |
239 | BookBaby | @TripawdMom Welcome to #BBchat! It's easy to follow along at https://t.co/EDFCkR24UD | 09/12/2015 21:01:49 |
240 | BookBaby | To learn more about @FirstEditing, read our intro post here: https://t.co/mmXc3jkqYl #BBchat | 09/12/2015 21:01:27 |
241 | FirstEditing | Hello! This is Heather Todd. I’m a full-time professional editor and consultant here with FirstEditing. Sooo glad to be here! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 21:01:26 |
242 | BookBaby | Please welcome today’s Q&A guest, Heather Todd, editor at @FirstEditing! #BBchat https://t.co/thLHt4E0Gk | 09/12/2015 21:01:02 |
243 | FirstEditing | RT @BookBaby: Welcome to the December edition of #BBchat! Today we're discussing Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! Join us 4-5pm ET. | 09/12/2015 21:01:02 |
244 | BookBaby | We recommend using a chat room during our #BBchat such as https://t.co/EDFCkR24UD | 09/12/2015 21:00:41 |
245 | BookBaby | Welcome to the December edition of #BBchat! Today we're discussing Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! Join us 4-5pm ET. | 09/12/2015 21:00:19 |
246 | toughii2 | RT @BookBaby: #BBchat begins in 15 minutes (4-5pm ET). Today’s topic: Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! https://t.co/UsriNy1wPn | 09/12/2015 20:55:08 |
247 | ExoticInkBooks | RT @FirstEditing: @ExoticInkBooks Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:45:31 |
248 | FirstEditing | RT @BookBaby: #BBchat begins in 15 minutes (4-5pm ET). Today’s topic: Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! https://t.co/UsriNy1wPn | 09/12/2015 20:45:31 |
249 | BookBaby | #BBchat begins in 15 minutes (4-5pm ET). Today’s topic: Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! https://t.co/UsriNy1wPn | 09/12/2015 20:45:04 |
250 | FirstEditing | @muninnherself Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:44:55 |
251 | FirstEditing | @Jim_Kam15 Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:44:39 |
252 | FirstEditing | @crzywritergrl Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:44:27 |
253 | FirstEditing | @toughii2 Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:44:17 |
254 | FirstEditing | @NidaPeabadly Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:43:51 |
255 | FirstEditing | @tweditorial1 Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:43:36 |
256 | FirstEditing | @ExoticInkBooks Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:43:17 |
257 | FirstEditing | @EditressClare Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:43:01 |
258 | FirstEditing | @authorskmiller Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:42:43 |
259 | FirstEditing | @AngelaKCouch Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:42:29 |
260 | FirstEditing | @Roses8raindrops Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:42:17 |
261 | FirstEditing | @Roses8raindrops Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @BookBaby! | 09/12/2015 20:42:17 |
262 | BookBaby | Take a break from #amediting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! https://t.co/w9Drcj5YNx | 09/12/2015 20:30:11 |
263 | FeFiFo_Fum | Hello! :) #bbchat | 09/12/2015 20:29:08 |
264 | EA_Hennessy | RT @BookBaby: 1 hour away! Today’s topic in #BBchat at 4pm ET: Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! https://t.co/MUv2OurYXR | 09/12/2015 20:14:00 |
265 | FirstEditing | RT @BookBaby: 1 hour away! Today’s topic in #BBchat at 4pm ET: Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! https://t.co/MUv2OurYXR | 09/12/2015 20:13:42 |
266 | BookBaby | 1 hour away! Today’s topic in #BBchat at 4pm ET: Life After #NaNoWriMo w/ @FirstEditing! https://t.co/MUv2OurYXR | 09/12/2015 20:00:25 |
267 | BookBaby | RT @donnasfineart: Please join @bookbaby on #Twitter using #bbchat...all #writers need help editing today & everyday! Be there! https://t.c… | 09/12/2015 19:29:22 |
268 | altomov | RT @BookBaby: @altomov Are you free today at 4pm Eastern to join us for #BBchat? We're talking about editing today! | 09/12/2015 19:21:40 |
269 | BridgetBlanton | RT @BookBaby: Our #BBchat w/ @FirstEditing is today! Topic is editing after #NaNoWriMo - https://t.co/fEEe4c7G6h #amediting https://t.co/tn… | 09/12/2015 17:56:11 |
270 | donnasfineart | Please join @bookbaby on #Twitter using #bbchat...all #writers need help editing today & everyday! Be there! https://t.co/EDgHfaXBpT | 09/12/2015 17:20:44 |
271 | FirstEditing | Looking forward to our chat today! #bbchat | 09/12/2015 16:54:35 |
272 | lisa_amowitz | RT @BookBaby: Our #BBchat w/ @FirstEditing is today! Topic is editing after #NaNoWriMo - https://t.co/fEEe4c7G6h #amediting https://t.co/tn… | 09/12/2015 16:45:54 |
273 | authorskmiller | RT @BookBaby: Our #BBchat w/ @FirstEditing is today! Topic is editing after #NaNoWriMo - https://t.co/fEEe4c7G6h #amediting https://t.co/tn… | 09/12/2015 16:31:31 |
274 | BookBaby | Our #BBchat w/ @FirstEditing is today! Topic is editing after #NaNoWriMo - https://t.co/fEEe4c7G6h #amediting https://t.co/tnFAgUKDue | 09/12/2015 16:24:01 |
275 | InfoliteTech | RT @BookBaby: @InfoliteTech Great advice! Are you free today at 4pm Eastern to join us for #BBchat? We're talking about editing today. | 09/12/2015 15:17:43 |
276 | EA_Hennessy | RT @BookBaby: Our #BBchat w/ @FirstEditing is tomorrow! Topic is editing after #NaNoWriMo - https://t.co/mmXc3jkqYl #amediting https://t.co… | 09/12/2015 15:13:37 |
277 | BookBaby | @EA_Hennessy This looks like such a fun group! Are you free today at 4pm Eastern to join us for #BBchat? We're talking about editing today! | 09/12/2015 15:06:30 |
278 | BookBaby | @altomov Are you free today at 4pm Eastern to join us for #BBchat? We're talking about editing today! | 09/12/2015 15:05:38 |
279 | BookBaby | @DrewAvera Love this! Are you free today at 4pm Eastern to join us for #BBchat? We're talking about editing today. | 09/12/2015 15:05:15 |
280 | BookBaby | @InfoliteTech Great advice! Are you free today at 4pm Eastern to join us for #BBchat? We're talking about editing today. | 09/12/2015 15:03:12 |
281 | BookBaby | @donnasfineart Love this quote! Are you free today at 4pm Eastern to join us for #BBchat? We're talking about editing today. | 09/12/2015 15:02:37 |
282 | BookBaby | @MacJ_Writer I'm so glad you've found them to be useful! If you're around this afternoon, we're having our monthly #BBchat at 4pm Eastern. | 09/12/2015 14:30:30 |
283 | wcmckeedotcom | RT @BookBaby: Our #BBchat w/ @FirstEditing is tomorrow! Topic is editing after #NaNoWriMo - https://t.co/mmXc3jkqYl #amediting https://t.co… | 08/12/2015 18:45:34 |
284 | lisa_amowitz | RT @BookBaby: Our #BBchat w/ @FirstEditing is tomorrow! Topic is editing after #NaNoWriMo - https://t.co/mmXc3jkqYl #amediting https://t.co… | 08/12/2015 18:42:30 |
285 | BookBaby | Our #BBchat w/ @FirstEditing is tomorrow! Topic is editing after #NaNoWriMo - https://t.co/mmXc3jkqYl #amediting https://t.co/i6y9mpfMni | 08/12/2015 18:24:02 |
286 | lisa_amowitz | RT @BookBaby: Our #BBchat w/ @FirstEditing is on Wednesday! Topic is editing after #NaNoWriMo - https://t.co/Y95QaIJkAt #amediting https://… | 07/12/2015 16:31:39 |
287 | BookBaby | Our #BBchat w/ @FirstEditing is on Wednesday! Topic is editing after #NaNoWriMo - https://t.co/Y95QaIJkAt #amediting https://t.co/EKUXdPtrLj | 07/12/2015 16:24:03 |
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