#BBchat Archive 9/23/15


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2	SimmiSilva	RT @BookBaby: Thanks everyone for joining this month’s #BBchat and thank you to @TheBookProfesso for chatting!	23/09/2015 22:07:43
3	SonjaSmithJones	@BookBaby #blushing #bbchat	23/09/2015 22:06:50
4	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Thanks to you all and happy writing! #bbchat	23/09/2015 22:06:24
5	SonjaSmithJones	RT @BookBaby: @SonjaSmithJones Thank you, Sonja! Familiar faces makes it all the more enjoyable. #BBchat	23/09/2015 22:06:23
6	SonjaSmithJones	RT @BookBaby: @SonjaSmithJones Thank you, Sonja! Familiar faces makes it all the more enjoyable. #BBchat	23/09/2015 22:06:23
7	BookBaby	@SonjaSmithJones Thank you, Sonja! Familiar faces makes it all the more enjoyable. #BBchat	23/09/2015 22:06:13
8	LiteraryLiving	Signing off of #bbchat. Thanks, @BookBaby and @thebookproffeso!! Cheers, all.	23/09/2015 22:05:58
9	BookBaby	@LiteraryLiving Thank you for sharing all of your advice today too, Joan! #BBchat	23/09/2015 22:05:39
10	SonjaSmithJones	@BookBaby Great questions! Enjoyed it. #bbchat	23/09/2015 22:05:38
11	TheBookProfesso	Thanks to you all and happy writing! #bbchat	23/09/2015 22:05:19
12	BookBaby	Thanks everyone for joining this month’s #BBchat and thank you to @TheBookProfesso for chatting!	23/09/2015 22:05:04
13	BookBaby	RT @LiteraryLiving: Have you done all YOU can at this point, @alisonsmela? If so, I'd go with a copy editor. #bbchat @TheBookProfesso	23/09/2015 22:05:03
14	LiteraryLiving	Have you done all YOU can at this point, @alisonsmela? If so, I'd go with a copy editor. #bbchat @TheBookProfesso	23/09/2015 22:04:55
15	BookBaby	If you have a minute, we would love any feedback you have about #BBchat! Here’s the link again: https://t.co/Xi4mCCia30	23/09/2015 22:04:04
16	BookBaby	RT @LiteraryLiving: I always want both developmental and sentence-level feedback (full story, and line-editing), @alisonsmela. #bbchat @The…	23/09/2015 22:03:28
17	BookBaby	RT @alisonsmela: @TheBookProfesso Been through that stage ... trying now to determine which type of edit is best to really "polish" my work…	23/09/2015 22:03:25
18	TheBookProfesso	@Alison, then a copy editor would be a good choice. #bbchat	23/09/2015 22:03:24
19	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Registering your copyright with the Library of Congress is a fun, final step. They send you an impressive certificate!…	23/09/2015 22:03:05
20	alisonsmela	@TheBookProfesso Been through that stage ... trying now to determine which type of edit is best to really "polish" my work. #bbchat	23/09/2015 22:02:36
21	LiteraryLiving	I always want both developmental and sentence-level feedback (full story, and line-editing), @alisonsmela. #bbchat @TheBookProfesso	23/09/2015 22:02:36
22	TheBookProfesso	Registering your copyright with the Library of Congress is a fun, final step. They send you an impressive certificate! #bbchat	23/09/2015 22:02:22
23	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: You can claim copyright the minute the words are on paper. To REGISTER your copyright, your book must be finished. #bb…	23/09/2015 22:01:41
24	BookBaby	RT @SonjaSmithJones: To copyright before it's professionally edited or not, is my question. How do you protect your work while unedited? #t…	23/09/2015 22:01:36
25	TheBookProfesso	You can claim copyright the minute the words are on paper. To REGISTER your copyright, your book must be finished. #bbchat	23/09/2015 22:01:29
26	SimmiSilva	Absolutely Alison! #BBChat https://t.co/br3BNoCI1j	23/09/2015 22:00:39
27	TheBookProfesso	I recommend a developmental editor first #bbchat	23/09/2015 22:00:32
28	SonjaSmithJones	To copyright before it's professionally edited or not, is my question. How do you protect your work while unedited? #trustissues #bbchat	23/09/2015 22:00:17
29	BookBaby	If you would like to be reminded about the next #BBchat, please sign up here: http://t.co/p9IuBhwEJP	23/09/2015 22:00:10
30	LiteraryLiving	A11. "Published" authors looking to me for editing help have "published" work that's terrible. Disservice to the writer. #bbchat @BookBaby	23/09/2015 21:59:57
31	alisonsmela	@SimmiSilva Thank heavens we're not alone! #BBChat https://t.co/H34uom1Nqk	23/09/2015 21:59:43
32	TheBookProfesso	The best resource for producing your book is @BookBaby. eBooks and POD! No better partner. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:58:42
33	alisonsmela	@TheBookProfesso What's more important to spend $$ on B4 shopping manuscript 2 publishers, copy edit or line edit? #BBChat	23/09/2015 21:58:16
34	SimmiSilva	@BookBaby #bbchat @TheBookProfesso I've been working on my novel for the past ten years. It's finally in the editing stages!	23/09/2015 21:58:04
35	BookBaby	@TheBookProfesso We see what you did there! :) #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:57:15
36	BookBaby	Q12. Any last questions for @TheBookProfesso today? We'll stay on for a few minutes after as well. #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:57:02
37	TheBookProfesso	Your book is your baby. Wrap it in a beautiful cover. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:56:33
38	LiteraryLiving	ALL adverbs? Can't a well-placed adverb be great? Why have adverbs at all if we don't ever use them? #bbchat @TheBookProfesso	23/09/2015 21:55:40
39	TheBookProfesso	The cost for professionals" It varies. There are lots of good resources on http://t.co/NRm2UW8ooH #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:55:17
40	BookBaby	RT @EA_Hennessy: @TheBookProfesso I give myself flexible "deadlines" only for the motivation, if I need more time I need more time #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:55:00
41	EA_Hennessy	@TheBookProfesso I give myself flexible "deadlines" only for the motivation, if I need more time I need more time #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:54:39
42	TheBookProfesso	@Joan I've used Hacker's book when teaching writing at the University. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:54:27
43	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: The pros you need: editor, cover designer, interior designer, proofreader. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:54:12
44	BookBaby	RT @LiteraryLiving: I like Diana Hacker's "A Writer's Reference." #bbchat @TheBookProfesso	23/09/2015 21:54:03
45	TheBookProfesso	The pros you need: editor, cover designer, interior designer, proofreader. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:54:00
46	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: If you want a professional book, you need to work with professionals. Publishing is an industry, and it has standards.…	23/09/2015 21:53:58
47	BritMcGinnis	RT @BookBaby: Please welcome today’s Q&A guest: @TheBookProfesso! #BBchat http://t.co/CqpOSlDi1u	23/09/2015 21:53:45
48	LiteraryLiving	I like Diana Hacker's "A Writer's Reference." #bbchat @TheBookProfesso	23/09/2015 21:53:23
49	SimmiSilva	RT @TheBookProfesso: Don't be afraid to share your weaknesses and failures. Your audience doesn't want an icon, they want a person. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:53:01
50	TheBookProfesso	If you want a professional book, you need to work with professionals. Publishing is an industry, and it has standards. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:52:56
51	BookBaby	Q11. Produce! Excuse me :) #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:52:39
52	aburke59	RT @BookBaby: Q9. What’s a good strategy for writing a book that is targeted to your particular audience? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:52:33
53	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Just because you don't know the rules of grammar & punctuation, that doesn't mean others don't. Get help from an edito…	23/09/2015 21:52:20
54	BookBaby	Q11. How important is it to invest in outside, professional help to product your manuscript and finished book? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:52:04
55	alisonsmela	RT @TheBookProfesso: LESSON: You need an editor. You need a professional editor. You need a KICK-ASS professional editor! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:51:47
56	TheBookProfesso	Just because you don't know the rules of grammar & punctuation, that doesn't mean others don't. Get help from an editor. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:51:36
57	LiteraryLiving	Oh man, I adore the semi-colon! http://t.co/wZy7UVFvVA @TheBookProfesso #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:51:27
58	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: I agree with Stephen King: slay all adverbs! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:51:07
59	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: If your mss is heavy with gerunds, write in simple past tense. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:51:04
60	TheBookProfesso	I agree with Stephen King: slay all adverbs! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:50:39
61	TheBookProfesso	If your mss is heavy with gerunds, write in simple past tense. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:50:15
62	BookBaby	@TheBookProfesso You'll probably end up looking like a semi-derrière! ;) #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:50:14
63	DDSyrdal	RT @TheBookProfesso: Most people don't remember the rules of grammar and punctuation and sentence style, but those who do, will notice erro…	23/09/2015 21:50:03
64	LiteraryLiving	That's what good desk references can help with! Reminding us about those rules. Which is your fav resource, @TheBookProfesso? #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:50:00
65	DDSyrdal	RT @TheBookProfesso: If you don't know how to use a semi-colon, don't ever use one. I guarantee you will be wrong. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:49:47
66	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: If you don't know how to use a semi-colon, don't ever use one. I guarantee you will be wrong. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:49:36
67	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: LESSON: You need an editor. You need a professional editor. You need a KICK-ASS professional editor! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:49:32
68	TheBookProfesso	If you don't know how to use a semi-colon, don't ever use one. I guarantee you will be wrong. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:49:25
69	TheBookProfesso	LESSON: You need an editor. You need a professional editor. You need a KICK-ASS professional editor! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:49:01
70	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Most people don't remember the rules of grammar and punctuation and sentence style, but those who do, will notice erro…	23/09/2015 21:48:38
71	TheBookProfesso	Most people don't remember the rules of grammar and punctuation and sentence style, but those who do, will notice errors. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:48:25
72	alisonsmela	EXACTLY! #BBchat https://t.co/ZJjroycI3M	23/09/2015 21:48:23
73	BookBaby	RT @alisonsmela: Precisely the intention 4 my book. I share what worked 4 me as an expression of #hope that my reader can 2! #BBchat https:…	23/09/2015 21:48:14
74	alisonsmela	Precisely the intention 4 my book. I share what worked 4 me as an expression of #hope that my reader can 2! #BBchat https://t.co/j81ZhJv5sU	23/09/2015 21:47:59
75	Savvy_Writer	RT @TheBookProfesso: To reach your target audience, you have to be real. Be transparent. They will know if you're not. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:47:58
76	SonjaSmithJones	@TheBookProfesso Yes! Relatability is key! Well, at least for me. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:47:46
77	LiteraryLiving	I'm a pantser, too, @DrPat_Reads, because I like the magic of surprises. :) @BookBaby @SonjaSmithJones #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:47:13
78	BookBaby	Q10. Do you find that amateur writers need more help with writing style, grammar, punctuation, etc. than professionals? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:47:02
79	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Don't be afraid to share your weaknesses and failures. Your audience doesn't want an icon, they want a person. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:46:55
80	TheBookProfesso	Don't be afraid to share your weaknesses and failures. Your audience doesn't want an icon, they want a person. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:46:50
81	SonjaSmithJones	@BookBaby Aw...THANK YOU!!! #honorthedash #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:46:45
82	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: To reach your target audience, you have to be real. Be transparent. They will know if you're not. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:46:39
83	BookBaby	@DrPat_Reads Speaking of pantsers, are you participating in @NaNoWriMo this fall? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:46:31
84	TheBookProfesso	To reach your target audience, you have to be real. Be transparent. They will know if you're not. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:46:02
85	pmartinauthor	RT @BookBaby: Q9. What’s a good strategy for writing a book that is targeted to your particular audience? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:46:01
86	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Think about the PROBLEMS your audience is experiences, and tell the story about how you overcame it yourself. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:45:00
87	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: In nonfiction, target audience has something in common with you. Just tell you story and you will connect. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:44:57
88	LiteraryLiving	At what point, @DrPat_Reads? Can't the end surprise you as well? I think so. @BookBaby @SonjaSmithJones #bbchat.	23/09/2015 21:44:56
89	BookBaby	@SonjaSmithJones You can do it, Sonja! #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:44:51
90	TheBookProfesso	Think about the PROBLEMS your audience is experiences, and tell the story about how you overcame it yourself. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:44:43
91	alisonsmela	RT @TheBookProfesso: Don't set false deadlines for completion. Doesn't have to be done by Christmas. It has to be excellent. Take the time!…	23/09/2015 21:44:30
92	SonjaSmithJones	@LiteraryLiving You are speaking my language...lol It will be done, when it's done...that said..hopefully 11/15. Ha! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:44:20
93	alisonsmela	RT @BookBaby: @alisonsmela Great response to negative criticism! #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:43:59
94	TheBookProfesso	In nonfiction, target audience has something in common with you. Just tell you story and you will connect. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:43:50
95	BookBaby	@DrPat_Reads Very well said, Pat! Happy to have you join us today for #BBchat.	23/09/2015 21:43:45
96	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Don't set false deadlines for completion. Doesn't have to be done by Christmas. It has to be excellent. Take the time!…	23/09/2015 21:43:23
97	BookBaby	@alisonsmela Great response to negative criticism! #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:43:15
98	LiteraryLiving	That works for some, @TheBookProfesso, but not for all. Many revise as we go - the "1st" draft is more like a 12th when done. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:43:12
99	BookBaby	RT @LiteraryLiving: I kept giving myself ridiculous deadlines: "Finish the Book by XX date!" I'd say. Ha ha ha ha. 6 years later ... #bbch…	23/09/2015 21:42:46
100	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Don't try to write a perfect mss on the first pass. That will cause you to fail. Just throw it out ALL there, THEN edi…	23/09/2015 21:42:42
101	TheBookProfesso	Don't set false deadlines for completion. Doesn't have to be done by Christmas. It has to be excellent. Take the time! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:42:32
102	BookBaby	Q9. What’s a good strategy for writing a book that is targeted to your particular audience? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:42:04
103	alisonsmela	Don't give any energy 2 comments like,"U're STILL working on that manuscript?"Ur work deserves time it needs.#BBchat https://t.co/3Ns94oj846	23/09/2015 21:41:47
104	LiteraryLiving	I kept giving myself ridiculous deadlines: "Finish the Book by XX date!" I'd say. Ha ha ha ha. 6 years later ... #bbchat @TheBookProfesso	23/09/2015 21:41:45
105	TheBookProfesso	RT @LiteraryLiving: John Irving reportedly always knows his final sentence, and writes the book until he gets there, @SonjaSmithJones. #bbc…	23/09/2015 21:41:18
106	TheBookProfesso	Don't try to write a perfect mss on the first pass. That will cause you to fail. Just throw it out ALL there, THEN edit #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:41:10
107	SonjaSmithJones	@LiteraryLiving Ah! So I'm in good company. lol #theresamethodtomymadness #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:40:46
108	BookBaby	RT @LiteraryLiving: John Irving reportedly always knows his final sentence, and writes the book until he gets there, @SonjaSmithJones. #bbc…	23/09/2015 21:39:41
109	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: When you have a BookMAP, even if you only have 15 minutes, you can contribute something to your book. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:39:26
110	TheCreativeJenn	RT @TheBookProfesso: If your writing goals aren't reasonable, you won't finish. Allow yourself twice as much time as you think you need. #…	23/09/2015 21:39:15
111	LiteraryLiving	John Irving reportedly always knows his final sentence, and writes the book until he gets there, @SonjaSmithJones. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:39:08
112	TheBookProfesso	When you have a BookMAP, even if you only have 15 minutes, you can contribute something to your book. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:38:55
113	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: If your writing goals aren't reasonable, you won't finish. Allow yourself twice as much time as you think you need. #…	23/09/2015 21:38:42
114	BookBaby	RT @LiteraryLiving: Totally agree, @TheBookProfesso. A good editor can help make EVERYTHING strong! :) #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:38:27
115	BookBaby	RT @LiteraryLiving: Thanks, @BookBaby and @SonjaSmithJones. It's been invaluable. I post my 6 mos contract on my bulletin board so it's top…	23/09/2015 21:38:24
116	TheBookProfesso	If your writing goals aren't reasonable, you won't finish. Allow yourself twice as much time as you think you need. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:38:21
117	LiteraryLiving	Totally agree, @TheBookProfesso. A good editor can help make EVERYTHING strong! :) #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:38:14
118	BookBaby	RT @bravrayj: @TheBookProfesso Been using Scrivener for years, don’t know why it took me so long to find it. #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:38:07
119	BookBaby	RT @SonjaSmithJones: LOL...I started my book with the ending and worked backward to fill in the blanks (supporting info). #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:38:01
120	SonjaSmithJones	RT @LiteraryLiving: Thanks, @BookBaby and @SonjaSmithJones. It's been invaluable. I post my 6 mos contract on my bulletin board so it's top…	23/09/2015 21:37:39
121	TheBookProfesso	RT @SonjaSmithJones: LOL...I started my book with the ending and worked backward to fill in the blanks (supporting info). #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:37:32
122	LiteraryLiving	Thanks, @BookBaby and @SonjaSmithJones. It's been invaluable. I post my 6 mos contract on my bulletin board so it's top of mind. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:37:15
123	TheBookProfesso	A good editor can also help you make your ending strong. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:37:11
124	BookBaby	Q8. Every project needs a plan, but how do you find and set reasonable goals and deadlines? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:37:05
125	SonjaSmithJones	LOL...I started my book with the ending and worked backward to fill in the blanks (supporting info). #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:37:03
126	TheBookProfesso	RT @LiteraryLiving: For 10 yrs I've been accountable to a group of writing friends. We do a contract every 6 mos, & check in monthly. #bbch…	23/09/2015 21:36:15
127	bravrayj	@TheBookProfesso Been using Scrivener for years, don’t know why it took me so long to find it. #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:36:13
128	BookBaby	RT @LiteraryLiving: I LOVE endings! The ending can be found in the entire book that precedes it. Weave in earlier themes. #bbchat @BookBaby…	23/09/2015 21:36:01
129	TheBookProfesso	RT @LiteraryLiving: I LOVE endings! The ending can be found in the entire book that precedes it. Weave in earlier themes. #bbchat @BookBaby…	23/09/2015 21:35:57
130	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: By the time you are finished w/ your book, you will be so sick of it -- but get lazy on the ending! Make it strong! #b…	23/09/2015 21:35:57
131	LiteraryLiving	I LOVE endings! The ending can be found in the entire book that precedes it. Weave in earlier themes. #bbchat @BookBaby @TheBookProfesso	23/09/2015 21:35:35
132	TheBookProfesso	By the time you are finished w/ your book, you will be so sick of it -- but get lazy on the ending! Make it strong! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:35:32
133	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Try writing several endings, then test them with your Focus Reader Group. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:35:25
134	SonjaSmithJones	@LiteraryLiving That's a great idea! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:35:20
135	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: A strong conclusion my deliver the reader to realize the purpose of the book. Revisit your Purpose Statement to do tha…	23/09/2015 21:35:00
136	BookBaby	RT @LiteraryLiving: For 10 yrs I've been accountable to a group of writing friends. We do a contract every 6 mos, & check in monthly. #bbch…	23/09/2015 21:34:53
137	BookBaby	@LiteraryLiving Love this suggestion, Joan! It's wonderful that you've found such a strong group. #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:34:47
138	TheBookProfesso	Try writing several endings, then test them with your Focus Reader Group. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:34:39
139	TheBookProfesso	A strong conclusion my deliver the reader to realize the purpose of the book. Revisit your Purpose Statement to do that. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:34:01
140	BookBaby	@TheBookProfesso We know how hard it is to let go! #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:33:57
141	LiteraryLiving	For 10 yrs I've been accountable to a group of writing friends. We do a contract every 6 mos, & check in monthly. #bbchat @TheBookProfesso	23/09/2015 21:33:36
142	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Ending a book is harder than starting it. Not every story ends with a pretty bow & all problems resolved. Be true to l…	23/09/2015 21:33:20
143	TheBookProfesso	Ending a book is harder than starting it. Not every story ends with a pretty bow & all problems resolved. Be true to life. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:33:03
144	BookBaby	Q7. When it comes to ending your book, what method do you recommend for finding the strongest conclusion? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:32:06
145	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Best tool of all: Accountability. Make a writing plan, then find someone to report to at every milestone. Or let me he…	23/09/2015 21:31:39
146	Savvy_Writer	RT @TheBookProfesso: Rule: NEVER respond to criticism in defense. Say "thank you," then accept it or reject it. Learned that in MFA grad sc…	23/09/2015 21:31:30
147	TheBookProfesso	Best tool of all: Accountability. Make a writing plan, then find someone to report to at every milestone. Or let me help you! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:31:26
148	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Another strong tool: Scrivener. Can't keep track of a mss in Word -- too much. Scrivener keeps you organized and on tr…	23/09/2015 21:30:39
149	TheBookProfesso	Another strong tool: Scrivener. Can't keep track of a mss in Word -- too much. Scrivener keeps you organized and on track. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:30:20
150	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: I love writing tools! Dragon dictation to get a draft out fast. It's going to be a hot mess, but we have to edit anywa…	23/09/2015 21:29:49
151	TheBookProfesso	I love writing tools! Dragon dictation to get a draft out fast. It's going to be a hot mess, but we have to edit anyway! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:29:21
152	alisonsmela	RT @TheBookProfesso: Rule: NEVER respond to criticism in defense. Say "thank you," then accept it or reject it. Learned that in MFA grad sc…	23/09/2015 21:28:51
153	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Rule: NEVER respond to criticism in defense. Say "thank you," then accept it or reject it. Learned that in MFA grad sc…	23/09/2015 21:28:29
154	alisonsmela	RT @TheBookProfesso: We seek criticism to make sure our message & writing is on the mark, not to gain praise. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:28:27
155	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: I never read criticism in the evening b/c I'm tired & it hurts my feelings! Always 1st thing in morning when I'm fresh…	23/09/2015 21:28:17
156	TheBookProfesso	Rule: NEVER respond to criticism in defense. Say "thank you," then accept it or reject it. Learned that in MFA grad school! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:28:13
157	BookBaby	Q6. Do you recommend any tools or resources for staying on track to amateur writers? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:27:06
158	TheBookProfesso	I never read criticism in the evening b/c I'm tired & it hurts my feelings! Always 1st thing in morning when I'm fresh. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:27:02
159	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: We seek criticism to make sure our message & writing is on the mark, not to gain praise. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:26:42
160	BookBaby	RT @Savvy_Writer: @TheBookProfesso @BookBaby I liked my AZ writing groups. Members provided useful feedback. Some were part of my target au…	23/09/2015 21:26:24
161	BookBaby	@TheBookProfesso Yes! There's no better way than asking the audience who you are trying to speak to! #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:26:17
162	TheBookProfesso	We seek criticism to make sure our message & writing is on the mark, not to gain praise. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:26:00
163	Savvy_Writer	@TheBookProfesso @BookBaby I liked my AZ writing groups. Members provided useful feedback. Some were part of my target audience. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:25:53
164	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Instead, gather a group of your target audience and let them tell you if your writing hits the mark or not. You will e…	23/09/2015 21:25:09
165	TheBookProfesso	Instead, gather a group of your target audience and let them tell you if your writing hits the mark or not. You will edit! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:24:31
166	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Suggestion: Don't let your friends and family read your work until it is in print. It's your book. You don't need that…	23/09/2015 21:24:24
167	BookBaby	@alisonsmela Love this quote! Your editor has a way with words ;) #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:24:04
168	TheBookProfesso	Suggestion: Don't let your friends and family read your work until it is in print. It's your book. You don't need that influence. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:23:36
169	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: If your feedback is strictly positive, find some other readers to offer an unbiased opinion. I use Focus Reader groups…	23/09/2015 21:23:26
170	TimBookTu	RT @TheBookProfesso: All writers need feedback. We aren't as good as we think we are & need a critical eye to help us be better. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:23:26
171	BookBaby	@japerry2000 Great question, Joey. We love Nancy's answer, and we have more tips about receiving feedback on our blog as well. #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:22:59
172	alisonsmela	Seeing upset in my eyes bcuz of many edit comments, my #editor said, "All I've done is polish what's good." #BBChat https://t.co/6zMFqOKk9U	23/09/2015 21:22:32
173	pmartinauthor	RT @alisonsmela: Propensity 4 #nonfiction #writers 2 get #published increases with #willingness 2 seek #guidance for that! #BBchat https://…	23/09/2015 21:22:31
174	TheBookProfesso	If your feedback is strictly positive, find some other readers to offer an unbiased opinion. I use Focus Reader groups. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:22:17
175	BookBaby	Q5. How do you coach writers when they’ve been swayed by the opinions of their friends and family? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:22:02
176	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Being defensive is natural. Our writing comes from the soul. The choice is to get better or stay average. I pick bette…	23/09/2015 21:21:43
177	TheBookProfesso	Being defensive is natural. Our writing comes from the soul. The choice is to get better or stay average. I pick better! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:21:15
178	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Nonfiction writers are often experts in their field, but aren't expert writers. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:21:14
179	Savvy_Writer	RT @TheBookProfesso: Nonfiction writers are often experts in their field, but aren't expert writers. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:20:25
180	BookBaby	@TheBookProfesso And for more tips on this topic, be sure to read Nancy's "10 Mistakes" post on our blog: http://t.co/qDGnj2nlqE #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:20:15
181	alisonsmela	How often u hear same thing then 1 person says in way it clicks. Room on shelf 4 many views of same topic! #BBchat https://t.co/vgqlknmbKd	23/09/2015 21:20:05
182	TheBookProfesso	Nonfiction writers are often experts in their field, but aren't expert writers. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:20:04
183	japerry2000	How do you keep from getting defensive when you receive critical feedback on your book draft? #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:19:53
184	Savvy_Writer	RT @TheBookProfesso: Even the best writers & authors rely on a professional editor to make them shine! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:19:35
185	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Even the best writers & authors rely on a professional editor to make them shine! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:19:31
186	TheBookProfesso	Even the best writers & authors rely on a professional editor to make them shine! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:19:26
187	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: All writers need feedback. We aren't as good as we think we are & need a critical eye to help us be better. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:19:26
188	TheBookProfesso	All writers need feedback. We aren't as good as we think we are & need a critical eye to help us be better. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:19:02
189	BookBaby	@JoAnnAinsworth Welcome! Glad you could join us for #BBchat :)	23/09/2015 21:18:31
190	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Your nonfiction book must have a clear purpose and be for a specific audience to be effective. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:18:04
191	JoAnnAinsworth	#BBchat Hi, Nancy. I know you'll have great information for us.	23/09/2015 21:17:52
192	TheBookProfesso	Your nonfiction book must have a clear purpose and be for a specific audience to be effective. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:17:50
193	BookBaby	Q4. When the writer is an expert in their topic, how do you persuade them to accept feedback from outside sources? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:17:04
194	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Plus, your book must have a purpose, and I help clients craft a Purpose Statement. Everything in the book drives to th…	23/09/2015 21:16:27
195	TheBookProfesso	Plus, your book must have a purpose, and I help clients craft a Purpose Statement. Everything in the book drives to that. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:16:15
196	Savvy_Writer	RT @TheBookProfesso: BUT the unique component is YOU. What's your perspective, your experience, your angle? Find that first, then write. #b…	23/09/2015 21:16:09
197	SonjaSmithJones	RT @TheBookProfesso: You're the only one who has your story, and you're the only one who can do it! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:16:04
198	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: You're the only one who has your story, and you're the only one who can do it! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:15:55
199	SonjaSmithJones	@TheBookProfesso Exactly! There are tons of books on #findingpurpose, but no story like my own. #honorthedash #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:15:54
200	TheBookProfesso	You're the only one who has your story, and you're the only one who can do it! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:15:35
201	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: BUT the unique component is YOU. What's your perspective, your experience, your angle? Find that first, then write. #b…	23/09/2015 21:15:04
202	TheBookProfesso	BUT the unique component is YOU. What's your perspective, your experience, your angle? Find that first, then write. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:14:50
203	pmartinauthor	RT @TheBookProfesso: Marketability is key. I suggest they read other books on their topic and in their genre first. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:14:49
204	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: If the book they want to write has already been written, then don't waste energy on the same thing. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:14:41
205	Savvy_Writer	RT @TheBookProfesso: Marketability is key. I suggest they read other books on their topic and in their genre first. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:14:30
206	alisonsmela	@TheBookProfesso, this is precisely the path I'm on! #BBchat https://t.co/7XGN2v16qI	23/09/2015 21:14:08
207	TheBookProfesso	If the book they want to write has already been written, then don't waste energy on the same thing. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:14:05
208	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Marketability is key. I suggest they read other books on their topic and in their genre first. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:13:56
209	BookBaby	@alisonsmela Well said, Alison! Nancy will definitely talk more about this throughout #BBchat!	23/09/2015 21:13:43
210	TheBookProfesso	Marketability is key. I suggest they read other books on their topic and in their genre first. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:13:13
211	BookBaby	RT @alisonsmela: Propensity 4 #nonfiction #writers 2 get #published increases with #willingness 2 seek #guidance for that! #BBchat https://…	23/09/2015 21:13:06
212	Savvy_Writer	RT @TheBookProfesso: We walk through a process where they create a visual map of the book & then write all the elements. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:13:03
213	alisonsmela	Propensity 4 #nonfiction #writers 2 get #published increases with #willingness 2 seek #guidance for that! #BBchat https://t.co/uUnIQ7C5Z1	23/09/2015 21:12:39
214	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: We walk through a process where they create a visual map of the book & then write all the elements. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:12:32
215	BookBaby	RT @SonjaSmithJones: @TheBookProfesso You hit the nail on the head. That describes me completely! #nonfiction #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:12:20
216	TheBookProfesso	We walk through a process where they create a visual map of the book & then write all the elements. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:12:15
217	Savvy_Writer	RT @TheBookProfesso: They have ideas & experiences that can change the lives of others and need help to crystallize their message. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:12:06
218	BookBaby	Q3. For nonfiction writers, marketability is key, so how do you make sure you have an original message and book concept? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:12:02
219	SonjaSmithJones	@TheBookProfesso You hit the nail on the head. That describes me completely! #nonfiction #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:11:54
220	BookBaby	@TheBookProfesso Great point, and also very applicable to writers looking to support their business & establish their brand. #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:11:32
221	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: They have ideas & experiences that can change the lives of others and need help to crystallize their message. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:11:00
222	TheBookProfesso	They have ideas & experiences that can change the lives of others and need help to crystallize their message. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:10:56
223	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: They've lived and learned things to pass on to others, and need a helping hand to do so. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:10:04
224	TheBookProfesso	They've lived and learned things to pass on to others, and need a helping hand to do so. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:09:49
225	pmartinauthor	RT @BookBaby: .@TheBookProfesso is a book marketer, executive book coach, author advocate and head of @Bookarma. #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:09:34
226	Savvy_Writer	RT @TheBookProfesso: Nonfiction writers need help! They are usually not writers -- they're LIVERS! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:09:24
227	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: But even if they aren't writers, they can become AUTHORS! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:09:03
228	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Nonfiction writers need help! They are usually not writers -- they're LIVERS! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:08:54
229	TheBookProfesso	But even if they aren't writers, they can become AUTHORS! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:08:50
230	TheBookProfesso	Nonfiction writers need help! They are usually not writers -- they're LIVERS! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:08:30
231	pmartinauthor	RT @BookBaby: To learn more about @TheBookProfesso, check out our intro post: http://t.co/vIu2I1vzsh or visit her site: http://t.co/Nt8vmYa…	23/09/2015 21:07:47
232	SonjaSmithJones	RT @BookBaby: Welcome to the Sept. edition of #BBchat! Today's topic is How to Write a Professional Manuscript w/ @TheBookProfesso! Join us…	23/09/2015 21:07:34
233	BookBaby	Q2. In your coaching experience, what kinds of writers typically need the most help with crafting a professional manuscript? #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:07:05
234	BookBaby	@alisonsmela Welcome, Alison! We love our windy city friends! #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:06:23
235	TheBookProfesso	Hi Alison! Welcome! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:06:09
236	alisonsmela	Hello! I'm Alison joining from Chicago. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:05:48
237	BookBaby	Also, if you have any feedback to share afterwards about #BBchat, or topic ideas, we have a short survey here: https://t.co/Xi4mCCia30	23/09/2015 21:05:44
238	Savvy_Writer	@BookBaby Thank you! Glad to be on the #BBchat.	23/09/2015 21:05:38
239	BookBaby	@Savvy_Writer Welcome, Amandah! Pleased to have you join us today for #BBchat.	23/09/2015 21:04:53
240	TheBookProfesso	Hi Amandah! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:04:42
241	BookBaby	@SonjaSmithJones Hello again, Sonja! :) #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:04:30
242	Savvy_Writer	Hello, I'm Amandah. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:04:18
243	SonjaSmithJones	Hi @TheBookProfesso, welcome. #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:04:12
244	TheBookProfesso	Hi Sonja! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:03:50
245	SonjaSmithJones	Hi all, Sonja here! #BBChat	23/09/2015 21:03:34
246	BookBaby	@TheBookProfesso By the way, if you haven't yet seen Nancy's sparkling new engagement ring, you simply must! :) #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:03:32
247	BookBaby	Q1. Who's with us today in #BBchat? Please introduce yourself and let the conversation begin! :)	23/09/2015 21:03:02
248	BookBaby	@TheBookProfesso We're so delighted to have you with us today, Nancy! #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:02:50
249	Savvy_Writer	RT @BookBaby: Please welcome today’s Q&A guest: @TheBookProfesso! #BBchat http://t.co/CqpOSlDi1u	23/09/2015 21:02:46
250	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: So glad to be with you today! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:02:31
251	TheBookProfesso	RT @BookBaby: To learn more about @TheBookProfesso, check out our intro post: http://t.co/vIu2I1vzsh or visit her site: http://t.co/Nt8vmYa…	23/09/2015 21:02:29
252	BookBaby	To learn more about @TheBookProfesso, check out our intro post: http://t.co/vIu2I1vzsh or visit her site: http://t.co/Nt8vmYaaYo #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:02:20
253	TheBookProfesso	So glad to be with you today! #bbchat	23/09/2015 21:02:09
254	BookBaby	.@TheBookProfesso is a book marketer, executive book coach, author advocate and head of @Bookarma. #BBchat	23/09/2015 21:02:06
255	TheBookProfesso	RT @BookBaby: Welcome to the Sept. edition of #BBchat! Today's topic is How to Write a Professional Manuscript w/ @TheBookProfesso! Join us…	23/09/2015 21:01:31
256	alisonsmela	RT @BookBaby: Welcome to the Sept. edition of #BBchat! Today's topic is How to Write a Professional Manuscript w/ @TheBookProfesso! Join us…	23/09/2015 21:01:11
257	BookBaby	Please welcome today’s Q&A guest: @TheBookProfesso! #BBchat http://t.co/CqpOSlDi1u	23/09/2015 21:01:04
258	BookBaby	We recommend using a chat room during our #BBchat such as http://t.co/EDFCkQKtw3	23/09/2015 21:00:40
259	BookBaby	Welcome to the Sept. edition of #BBchat! Today's topic is How to Write a Professional Manuscript w/ @TheBookProfesso! Join us 4-5pm ET.	23/09/2015 21:00:13
260	BookBaby	@japerry2000 Welcome to #BBchat, Joey!	23/09/2015 20:58:48
261	alisonsmela	RT @BookBaby: #BBchat begins in 15 minutes (4-5pm ET). Today’s topic: How to Write a Professional Manuscript w/ @TheBookProfesso!	23/09/2015 20:58:18
262	japerry2000	Just joined... #bbchat	23/09/2015 20:58:17
263	BookBaby	@tanyalc28 Our #BBchat starts in a few minutes if you'd like to join us!	23/09/2015 20:53:47
264	EA_Hennessy	RT @TheBookProfesso: Looking forward to #bbchat in just a few minutes! Join us!	23/09/2015 20:48:50
265	SonjaSmithJones	RT @BookBaby: @SonjaSmithJones Wonderful! So glad you can join us today for #BBchat! :)	23/09/2015 20:47:56
266	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Looking forward to #bbchat in just a few minutes! Join us!	23/09/2015 20:46:51
267	BookBaby	@nfalkestav Nancy will discuss "How to Write a Professional Manuscript" & share advice she typically gives when coaching authors. #BBchat	23/09/2015 20:45:32
268	TheBookProfesso	Looking forward to #bbchat in just a few minutes! Join us!	23/09/2015 20:45:28
269	BookBaby	#BBchat begins in 15 minutes (4-5pm ET). Today’s topic: How to Write a Professional Manuscript w/ @TheBookProfesso!	23/09/2015 20:45:02
270	nfalkestav	@BookBaby @SonjaSmithJones @alisonsmela @aburke59 @bravrayj @TheDarkNovelist @PoetFida @WriterSJHimes what is the subject? #BBchat	23/09/2015 20:43:27
271	BookBaby	@SonjaSmithJones Wonderful! So glad you can join us today for #BBchat! :)	23/09/2015 20:36:20
272	BookBaby	Take a break from #amwriting and join us at #BBchat in 30 minutes for How to Write a Professional Manuscript w/ @TheBookProfesso!	23/09/2015 20:30:06
273	Anne_Claire_r	Tu me manques j'en ai marre ! 😡 #bbchat @edmond_dqn	23/09/2015 20:24:13
274	BookBaby	@JLovesAStory @alexisdaria @shirlbro @docmon67 @wordamour @ikhrys @BridgetBlanton @glenda_macd @altomov Reminder for #BBchat at 4pm ET! :)	23/09/2015 20:06:22
275	BookBaby	@GentleStorms @TamwoodIvy @MyDreamsMatter @Lindakwert @AuthorofCicada @SmithPublicity @Erinsukij Reminder for #BBchat at 4pm ET! :)	23/09/2015 20:04:03
276	BookBaby	@LiteraryLiving @DrewAvera @LaurenLynneYA @AuthZH @iPad_storytime @t_peeZW @BritMcGinnis @AnnetteMardis48 Reminder for #BBchat at 4pm ET! :)	23/09/2015 20:00:47
277	BookBaby	1 hour away! Today’s topic in #BBchat at 4pm ET: How to Write a Professional Manuscript w/ @TheBookProfesso!	23/09/2015 20:00:10
278	BookBaby	@SonjaSmithJones @alisonsmela @nfalkestav @aburke59 @bravrayj @TheDarkNovelist @PoetFida @WriterSJHimes Reminder for #BBchat at 4pm ET! :)	23/09/2015 19:55:38
279	TheBookProfesso	RT @EA_Hennessy: Enjoyed listening to @TheBookProfesso during #sparksessions, looking forward to #BBChat today!	23/09/2015 19:09:27
280	TheBookProfesso	RT @EA_Hennessy: Enjoyed listening to @TheBookProfesso during #sparksessions, looking forward to #BBChat today!	23/09/2015 19:09:27
281	dnaturesfarmacy	RT @NinaAmir: An email list is a platform you own. You don't own the platform you build on a social network. You need an email list. #bbchat	23/09/2015 16:24:49
282	BookBaby	@EA_Hennessy @TheBookProfesso See you then! :) #BBchat	23/09/2015 15:00:09
283	BookBaby	RT @TheBookProfesso: Today is the day for my #BBchat with @BookBaby.Details here: http://t.co/B2ycthH0vR See you at 4:00pm EST! http://t.co…	23/09/2015 14:59:55
284	EA_Hennessy	Enjoyed listening to @TheBookProfesso during #sparksessions, looking forward to #BBChat today!	23/09/2015 14:33:46
285	TheBookProfesso	Today is the day for my #BBchat with @BookBaby.Details here: http://t.co/B2ycthH0vR See you at 4:00pm EST! http://t.co/KoJyG8bGCx	23/09/2015 14:30:00
286	cssoares	Join Nancy L. Erickson for BookBaby's #BBchat on 9/23 http://t.co/8dZdgRW5wa	23/09/2015 04:58:53
287	Bookarma	RT @BookBaby: .@tanyalc28 How convenient! The next edition of our monthly #BBchat will be on 9/23 w/ Nancy Baumann @Bookarma on "book disco…	22/09/2015 20:16:17
288	BookBaby	Join us tomorrow afternoon for #BBchat with @TheBookProfesso! - http://t.co/o4MWTXf5aO http://t.co/2tE26fInhX	22/09/2015 18:44:58
289	STLDanni	RT @BookBaby: Join us for #BBchat with @TheBookProfesso on Wednesday! - http://t.co/JYlWK7MQeP http://t.co/3JWV5SRuYD	21/09/2015 23:52:27
290	Bookarma	RT @BookBaby: Join us for #BBchat with @TheBookProfesso on Wednesday! - http://t.co/JYlWK7MQeP http://t.co/3JWV5SRuYD	21/09/2015 23:47:01
291	TheBookProfesso	RT @BookBaby: Join us for #BBchat with @TheBookProfesso on Wednesday! - http://t.co/JYlWK7MQeP http://t.co/3JWV5SRuYD	21/09/2015 19:38:59
292	BookBaby	Join us for #BBchat with @TheBookProfesso on Wednesday! - http://t.co/JYlWK7MQeP http://t.co/3JWV5SRuYD	21/09/2015 18:24:14
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