There is a big problem facing our country. The problem is no one cares about the environment we are living in. First, people don't recycle.  Second, they don't clean after them self's. Third, they cut down the trees. I urge you to try and change the  environment.

    People don't care about the environment because people don't recycle. One reason is people throw things on the floor. Another reason is people are lazy. The last reason is that they don't want to recycle. For that reason that is why people don't want to recycle.

    People don't care about the environment because people don't clean up after them self's. They leave garbage on the  floor. They also throw things on the floor. They don't pick up their garbage. Clearly that is why people don't clean after them self's.

    People don't  care about the environment because people cut down the tress.  They cut down animals homes. They don't care about the animals that live there. They use it for useless things. For example building project, or for paper. Evidently that is why people cut down trees.

    I recommend you to try and change the environment. Thank you Mr.president for your time and consideration.

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