Mr. Sloan
Freshmen English
2nd part of 2007-08 First Semester Final

Revise the last paper you wrote, the persuasive research paper, so that it is a 300-word editorial.  Below are some criteria to consider during your revision process.

•    Focus tightly on one issue or idea --- in your first paragraph. Be brief.
•    Express your opinion, then base it on factual, researched or first-hand information.
•    Make concessions to the other side, then counter those concessions.
•    Be timely, controversial, but not outrageous. Be the voice of reason.
•    Be personal and conversational; it can help you make your point.
•    Be humorous, provided that your topic lends itself to humor.
•    Have a clear editorial viewpoint - come down hard on one side of the issue. Don't equivocate.
•    Provide insight, understanding: educate your reader without being preachy.
•    Near the end, clearly re-state your position and issue a call to action. Don't philosophize.
•    Have verve, and "fire in the gut" indignation to accompany your logical analysis.
•    Don't ramble or let your op-ed unfold slowly, as in an essay.
•    Use clear, powerful, direct language.
•    Emphasize active verbs.
•    Avoid clichés and jargon.
•    Appeal to the average reader. Clarity is paramount.